He's Late, He's Late!
Not quite Alice's White Rabbit...16 total reviews
Comment from Aaron Milavec
Strong fantasy poem. Jives with your pic. The last line doesn't work for me. How about this alternative?
Bet you'll without worry arrive home!
Joy and peace in writing,
Aaron
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Strong fantasy poem. Jives with your pic. The last line doesn't work for me. How about this alternative?
Bet you'll without worry arrive home!
Joy and peace in writing,
Aaron
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your suggestion, Aaron. However, as you can see in the contest definition, there is a very strict formatting that must be followed and your suggestion does not fit the required formatting. But I do appreciate your input! Thanks for your time, my friend, and have a great weekend!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is a cute fun write as this gnome rushes to get home and this reminds me of me when I am on a food shopping expedition! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Ha ha ha, this is a cute fun write as this gnome rushes to get home and this reminds me of me when I am on a food shopping expedition! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Especially when you have a specific food in mind and it's chilly outside, yeah? lol! Thank you for your review and the smile, Dolly!
Comment from Pirate Sam
Amazing poem truly brilliant and imaginative a sure runner Tyburn poetry contest im book marking this i want to have it to read again and again thank you so very much my friend for enhancing my night you Rock!
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Amazing poem truly brilliant and imaginative a sure runner Tyburn poetry contest im book marking this i want to have it to read again and again thank you so very much my friend for enhancing my night you Rock!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much, Pirate Sam! So glad you enjoyed my funny little fella!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hurry, scurry, furry these substantive contains a certain windy musicality.Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Hurry, scurry, furry these substantive contains a certain windy musicality.Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed my funny little fella!!
Comment from kahpot
Your artwork is captivating, and your words describing it are excellent, a wonderful entry for a very difficult form (prompt) best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Your artwork is captivating, and your words describing it are excellent, a wonderful entry for a very difficult form (prompt) best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging comments! Have a great evening!
Comment from June Sargent
The tyburn is not an easy format to work with, but you have successfully crafted one that is not only amusing - It actually makes sense. Cute artwork complements the presentation.
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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The tyburn is not an easy format to work with, but you have successfully crafted one that is not only amusing - It actually makes sense. Cute artwork complements the presentation.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you, June, for your encouraging review! Have a great night!
