He's Late, He's Late!
Not quite Alice's White Rabbit...16 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really good and very well thought out. I like how it flows along effortlessly. I've never caught one of those gnomes on the move. Perhaps I need to rise a bit earlier. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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This is really good and very well thought out. I like how it flows along effortlessly. I've never caught one of those gnomes on the move. Perhaps I need to rise a bit earlier. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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He's a funny little fella, yeah? Thank you for your wonderful comments!
Comment from Stephanie Paige
I enjoyed reading your poem. Tyburn is a new form of poetry for me. It's form is very interesting. There is a touch of humor in this poem. I have to admit, I love gnomes. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Tyburn is a new form of poetry for me. It's form is very interesting. There is a touch of humor in this poem. I have to admit, I love gnomes. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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They are fun little fellas! Thank you for your review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
You created a beautiful tyburn poem for the contest. Good syllable count. The presentation is nice. Good luck in the tyburn contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Hello my friend
You created a beautiful tyburn poem for the contest. Good syllable count. The presentation is nice. Good luck in the tyburn contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Begin Again
Cute playful way with words. Brought a smile to my lips. Good luck with the contest. Poetry writing isnt for me so I know nothing of the rules of each type of writing, but I can still enjoy it.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Cute playful way with words. Brought a smile to my lips. Good luck with the contest. Poetry writing isnt for me so I know nothing of the rules of each type of writing, but I can still enjoy it.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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It is good to know he made you smile! Than you!
Comment from May 1
Honestly, I am not familiar with this type of poetry but it sure was fun to read. It feels like a fun little game. All in all, I had a lot of fun reading it and I adore the image you chose for this one.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Honestly, I am not familiar with this type of poetry but it sure was fun to read. It feels like a fun little game. All in all, I had a lot of fun reading it and I adore the image you chose for this one.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Your review is much appreciated!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Fun! I liked the way you turned the implication of worry scurry on its head with the word without. He looks tired and ready for a good meal. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Fun! I liked the way you turned the implication of worry scurry on its head with the word without. He looks tired and ready for a good meal. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Lol! Thank you for your review, Darlene!
Comment from Justin Chopin
Very creative. Enjoyed your whimsical words especially since they pertain to the gnome's desire to get back home . Great job with this piece you should try to make some sort of stories about this gnome and his adventures in the outside world. Fantastic work.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Very creative. Enjoyed your whimsical words especially since they pertain to the gnome's desire to get back home . Great job with this piece you should try to make some sort of stories about this gnome and his adventures in the outside world. Fantastic work.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thanks, Justin, for your encouraging words! Have a great weekend!
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You're welcome.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This poem goes well with the picture. Children will love the sounds of these word even though they might not understand the meaning or how the words connect in the poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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This poem goes well with the picture. Children will love the sounds of these word even though they might not understand the meaning or how the words connect in the poem. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Much fun, yes? Thank you for your delightful review!
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tyburn about the furry gnome that seems to be in a hurry to get elsewhere, but we know that he will scurry home without a worry.
Typo
Bet you'll without worry, hurry(scurry)home! [To my knowledge it should be the fourth rhyming word.]
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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A very well-written Tyburn about the furry gnome that seems to be in a hurry to get elsewhere, but we know that he will scurry home without a worry.
Typo
Bet you'll without worry, hurry(scurry)home! [To my knowledge it should be the fourth rhyming word.]
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you, thank you for that catch, Sandra! So very much appreciated! Have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is a really cute Tyburn poem. It fits the criteria perfectly. No, he's not Alice's White Rabbit, but he's a furry gnome, so he's got to be cute. And he must be a sociable character, since he's got folks waiting for him. I think children would enjoy this poem, too.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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This is a really cute Tyburn poem. It fits the criteria perfectly. No, he's not Alice's White Rabbit, but he's a furry gnome, so he's got to be cute. And he must be a sociable character, since he's got folks waiting for him. I think children would enjoy this poem, too.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed my funny little fella!