Comment from Marjon van Bruggen

Excellent

Very nice and thought-provoking 5-7-5 poem. I liked it a lot. The image is perfectly matching the poem. Yes, we women (or men, for that manner) have not changed since the Garden of Eden. We still lure men into our web and men are only too eager to be lured!
Well done!

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020

---

reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020

Interesting read -thanks for sharing zanya

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 07-Mar-2020

Thank you, Zanya! I didn't expect any more reviews on this one. Nice surprise.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Love the artwork, along with your excellent words I see the only that may have evolved is the snake-now called politicians, an excellent 5-7-5 there are probably many ways to read this but this is what I see, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020

---

reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020

Simply loved this review - laughed out loud ! zanya

Comment from Pirate Sam

Good

What an amazing poetic question! But has it evolved more rapidly perhaps? Or did it make a difference at all if she did infact eat the fruit of knowledge in the first place? But outstanding question thank you for tvat

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020

---

reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020

Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts zanya