Purple haiku
5-7-5 traditional haiku11 total reviews
Comment from Stephanie Paige
I enjoyed reading your poem. Your choice of words makes this poem read well and is very descriptive. I can almost picture lavender or lilacs and smell their scent. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Your choice of words makes this poem read well and is very descriptive. I can almost picture lavender or lilacs and smell their scent. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Stephanie, thank you. And the very idea of haiku is exactly that: to give the reader an image, a smell, just with words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the scene to my senses and the field is touched by twilight and filled with perfumes flowers, much enjoyed, an ambient and soothing write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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You brought the scene to my senses and the field is touched by twilight and filled with perfumes flowers, much enjoyed, an ambient and soothing write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Dolly!
Comment from RShipp
You have followed the requirements for a haiku-type composition.
Your picture was well chosen for your 5-7-5.
Lavender is one of my favorite scents in the garden! It does bring on memories!!
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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You have followed the requirements for a haiku-type composition.
Your picture was well chosen for your 5-7-5.
Lavender is one of my favorite scents in the garden! It does bring on memories!!
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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RShipp, that was a nice review. Thank you.
Comment from Begin Again
What a wonderful vision this would be to see...miles and miles of brillant purple flowers and the aroma rising up to greet us. Awesome descriptive words to match the painted picture. Well done
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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What a wonderful vision this would be to see...miles and miles of brillant purple flowers and the aroma rising up to greet us. Awesome descriptive words to match the painted picture. Well done
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Begin Again, Very nice review. Thank you so much.
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that you wrote a creative and wonderful haiku. I think the field represents memories of maybe what the main character experienced from his past. Maybe the main character grew up on a farm. Your haiku was amazing, and it really made me think.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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I think that you wrote a creative and wonderful haiku. I think the field represents memories of maybe what the main character experienced from his past. Maybe the main character grew up on a farm. Your haiku was amazing, and it really made me think.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Jeffrey, thank you very much. A beautiful review.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Your 5-7-5 traditional haiku is a fine entry for the contest.
Purple haiku...is a beautiful poem about lavender fields. Good visual image but the picture is literally the poem so you miss the opportunity to visualize the haiku. I would change it to a single lavender flower. Good job.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Your 5-7-5 traditional haiku is a fine entry for the contest.
Purple haiku...is a beautiful poem about lavender fields. Good visual image but the picture is literally the poem so you miss the opportunity to visualize the haiku. I would change it to a single lavender flower. Good job.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thanks, Gypsy flower!
Comment from royowen
What a wonderful piece of artwork to adorn your marvellous 5/7/5 poetic entry in this contest, purple is the colour of royalty, and this is a right royal post in the contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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What a wonderful piece of artwork to adorn your marvellous 5/7/5 poetic entry in this contest, purple is the colour of royalty, and this is a right royal post in the contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Roy, that is a nice thing to say. A royalty...wow!
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Of course
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very busy haiku about the purple lavender fields that stretch as far as the eyes can see and I can only imagine the lovely lavender fragrance in the light breeze.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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A very busy haiku about the purple lavender fields that stretch as far as the eyes can see and I can only imagine the lovely lavender fragrance in the light breeze.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Sandra, for the nice review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful haiku offering in the 5-7-5 offering... for those that do not read author notes or title tags, you might consider using the traditional titling of a haiku to make it clear the effect you were going for:
haiku (deep purple)
Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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A beautiful haiku offering in the 5-7-5 offering... for those that do not read author notes or title tags, you might consider using the traditional titling of a haiku to make it clear the effect you were going for:
haiku (deep purple)
Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Yvette. A pleasure to read your reviews.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 haiku for the contest
with very good imagery and connection in the first two lines.
The third line satori offers a nice reflective thought.
The seasonal reference is very good.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 haiku for the contest
with very good imagery and connection in the first two lines.
The third line satori offers a nice reflective thought.
The seasonal reference is very good.
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Robert, thank you for such a nice review and the stars!
