Soul Purpose
The belief of many who look forward to an afterlife.3 total reviews
Comment from gingermo
I like this poem because it gives a profound message. 'We are arranged dust,' an unusual metaphor for the human being. Connected together brings in all sorts of thoughts...one being that what we do to others we do to ourselves. If we are all immortal souls how can we ever say we are better or worse than anyone else. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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I like this poem because it gives a profound message. 'We are arranged dust,' an unusual metaphor for the human being. Connected together brings in all sorts of thoughts...one being that what we do to others we do to ourselves. If we are all immortal souls how can we ever say we are better or worse than anyone else. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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I like your comments we should all consider ourselves as equal, if we did the world would be a better place. Thanks for your read and comments.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Arranged dust connected through the divine soul, what a beautiful image. No matter what direction we choose in this mortal life we always resume the "dust to dust" at the end. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Arranged dust connected through the divine soul, what a beautiful image. No matter what direction we choose in this mortal life we always resume the "dust to dust" at the end. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thanks for your read and comment.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful thought for the 5-7-5 contest with a beautiful image! ;) I would suggest, however, that your tilde is out of place as it severs the flow of your beautiful statement: you do not have one sentence/thought that ends with 'by' and a completely different sentence/though that begins with 'an' they are one continuous sentence/thought... as such, the tilde is an awkward addition. You truly have captured a lovely theme here - thank you for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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A wonderful thought for the 5-7-5 contest with a beautiful image! ;) I would suggest, however, that your tilde is out of place as it severs the flow of your beautiful statement: you do not have one sentence/thought that ends with 'by' and a completely different sentence/though that begins with 'an' they are one continuous sentence/thought... as such, the tilde is an awkward addition. You truly have captured a lovely theme here - thank you for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Changed the title to Soul Purpose and deleted the tilde. Thanks for your help.
