Complicated Beauty
Because the simple words were forbidden...30 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You have well described the beauty of God's world through the open door. I grew up in a house that had two 10' and two 8' feet picture windows. Winter was especially lovely with all the icicles hanging from the forest surrounding the house. I can identify with your poem.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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You have well described the beauty of God's world through the open door. I grew up in a house that had two 10' and two 8' feet picture windows. Winter was especially lovely with all the icicles hanging from the forest surrounding the house. I can identify with your poem.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much, Thaities! I'm so glad you enjoyed my crazy 'big word' fun... I couldn't resist being a bit 'sarcastic' with the contest definition... so glad they made you smile!! Take care out there and thank you again! :) Yvette
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You're quite welcome!
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Yvette,
Wow! A tour de force of lexographic brilliance. You certainly did it the hard way, just to avoid those pesky verboten words. But, you did it with style, imagery and humour. I pray this one is a winner.
Good luck.
Reg
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Dear Yvette,
Wow! A tour de force of lexographic brilliance. You certainly did it the hard way, just to avoid those pesky verboten words. But, you did it with style, imagery and humour. I pray this one is a winner.
Good luck.
Reg
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for your awesome review, Reg! I'm so glad you enjoyed my crazy 'verboten' words... I couldn't resist being a bit 'sarcastic' with the contest definition... so glad they made you smile!! Take care out there and thank you again! :) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette. When I first opened up the poem, I had to rub my eyes a few times because I saw all the waviness in the picture. Then I realized it was actually rain. You did an absolutely outstanding job of avoiding normal words. The mundane was exiled.
I like the rhyme pattern really well and enjoyed reading your polysyllabic words. Good luck in the contest.
Z
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Hello Yvette. When I first opened up the poem, I had to rub my eyes a few times because I saw all the waviness in the picture. Then I realized it was actually rain. You did an absolutely outstanding job of avoiding normal words. The mundane was exiled.
I like the rhyme pattern really well and enjoyed reading your polysyllabic words. Good luck in the contest.
Z
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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The mundane shall always be exiled in the world of the crazy blonde!! ;) :) LOL! Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, sir -- could not have been any more perfectly stated!! :) You take care our there, Z! :) Yvette
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As soon as you stop the mundane, you lose half the audience here. (that wasn't nice was it?) TEE HEE
Comment from djsaxon
Awesome write on many levels. Love the PicMix image. Solid ABAB rhyme throughout and a delicious choice of what I call "25 dollar " words. The author notes surely let some peeps sleep easier. DJ
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Awesome write on many levels. Love the PicMix image. Solid ABAB rhyme throughout and a delicious choice of what I call "25 dollar " words. The author notes surely let some peeps sleep easier. DJ
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Wow, DJ!! You just made my weekend (been grading lots of papers!!)... and I'm quite sure it'll carry me into Monday (ugh! lol!), so thank you for both your comments and those lovely stars - so awesome! I'm so glad you enjoyed my crazy '$25' words... I couldn't resist being a bit 'sarcastic' with the contest definition... so glad they made you smile!! Take care out there and thank you again! :) Yvette
Comment from victor 66
Your illustration is quite appropriate for such a lovely poem. Both feel a little isolated and yet at the same time, most welcoming. I suspect that's the hope of the end of winter and the way most of us feel about spring. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Your illustration is quite appropriate for such a lovely poem. Both feel a little isolated and yet at the same time, most welcoming. I suspect that's the hope of the end of winter and the way most of us feel about spring. Best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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You're so right, Victor - I am SOOOO ready for Spring to get it's butt here, sir!! ;) Thanx for your review - it is appreciated, as always! ;) Yvette
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Yvette, I've live in Minnesota and it can snow in October and then again in May. Once in a while I believe we skip spring all together. But hopefully not this year. And, are most welcome.
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Lol! Well, sir, if anyone understands unpredictable weather its us folks here in the South: in the Winter especially, if you don't like the weather one day, just wait till tomorrow.... it's bound to be different! ;) Take care of you! ;)
Comment from Stephanie Paige
I enjoyed reading your poem. You use of rare vocabulary was great. I admit I have not heard of some of these words but loved learning their meaning. This is a beautiful poem about Spring. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed reading your poem. You use of rare vocabulary was great. I admit I have not heard of some of these words but loved learning their meaning. This is a beautiful poem about Spring. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Twas fun using the 'big' words! Thank you for your review!!
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect math.
You captured my attention from the start even though I didn't know some word meant later I understood your delightful poem more .Like I always say I'm never to old to learn
Have a safe and blessed week end.
Cookie
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect math.
You captured my attention from the start even though I didn't know some word meant later I understood your delightful poem more .Like I always say I'm never to old to learn
Have a safe and blessed week end.
Cookie
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Had a little fun mixing in 'the big words' - wink, wink! ;) ;) Thanks for the review and have a Fabulous Friday!!
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You very welcome. enjoy your days as for me I'm going to the doctor
cookie
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, excellent piece of poetry. I liked the way you described your work. It's superby and beauty. Good use of vocabulary. Good presentation and also an exceptional image.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Hi, excellent piece of poetry. I liked the way you described your work. It's superby and beauty. Good use of vocabulary. Good presentation and also an exceptional image.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Wow, Heaven Empress!! You just made my weekend... got a great smile on right now that'll last through any of this incessant rain 'round here, so thank you for both your comments and those lovely stars - so awesome! Spring, Spring: get your butt in gear and warm things up! LOL!
I'm so glad you enjoyed my crazy 'big' words... so glad you enjoyed!! Take care out there and thank you again! :)
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Although I do not know the details, you simply need to go to your 'messages' and at the bottom there you'll see a box entitled "CONTACT US". Send a message requesting the information you need and Tom, the webmaster, will address the issue for you. :) :)
Have a wonderful weekend! ;)
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Thanks so much! Blessed weekend too.
Comment from RShipp
Your picture matched your poem nicely.
You did a good job at avoiding the banished words.
Thanks for the attached glossary... It was helpful to clarify things more vividly.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Your picture matched your poem nicely.
You did a good job at avoiding the banished words.
Thanks for the attached glossary... It was helpful to clarify things more vividly.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for your review!
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, thank you for all of the definitions, I was just about to start calling on Google! I haven't seen that many new words in a while. It's been a springtime bonanza! Well done :)
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hello Author, thank you for all of the definitions, I was just about to start calling on Google! I haven't seen that many new words in a while. It's been a springtime bonanza! Well done :)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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No Google required... definitions at your service!! It's good to expand that 'Northern Vocab'... lol!! Thank you for the review! ;)
