Just An Overgrown Kitten
An Even the Odds poem Lion and Lamb12 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Congrats on First Place, June!! ;) Such a precious and unique offering - well deserved, my lady!! ;) Thanx so much for joining the ETO contest fun this time around - great fun!! ;) Take care and have a great remainder of the week! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Congrats on First Place, June!! ;) Such a precious and unique offering - well deserved, my lady!! ;) Thanx so much for joining the ETO contest fun this time around - great fun!! ;) Take care and have a great remainder of the week! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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thank you! It was a fun challenge.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a lovely little poem and an excellent entry for the contest inspired by March weather. The picture highlights the words nicely. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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This is a lovely little poem and an excellent entry for the contest inspired by March weather. The picture highlights the words nicely. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Begin Again
a nice comparison of the change of seasons using the lion and the lamb. Loved the use of the picture. Wish you luck in the contest. Enjoyed the read. Smiles!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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a nice comparison of the change of seasons using the lion and the lamb. Loved the use of the picture. Wish you luck in the contest. Enjoyed the read. Smiles!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Aphthong
Lion and Lamb.. I liked the theme which you selected.. And an interesting way of presentation too.. Vivid imagery of winter and spring.. Great entry in the contest... Good luck poet...
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Lion and Lamb.. I liked the theme which you selected.. And an interesting way of presentation too.. Vivid imagery of winter and spring.. Great entry in the contest... Good luck poet...
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this fun piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Minglement
This is a clever entry for the Lion and Lamb poem. I loved the poem form you used to express these seasonal hallmarks. a smooth, melodic read with great presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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This is a clever entry for the Lion and Lamb poem. I loved the poem form you used to express these seasonal hallmarks. a smooth, melodic read with great presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Again, I appreciate very much your taking the time to read and review!
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You are most welfare če. Good luck;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written even the odds about the lion roaring to dominate the plains with blizzards all over that turn to slush in warmer weather. When daffodils band and crocuses appear the lamb will push out the overgrown cat.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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A very well-written even the odds about the lion roaring to dominate the plains with blizzards all over that turn to slush in warmer weather. When daffodils band and crocuses appear the lamb will push out the overgrown cat.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Your contest entry for Even the Odds poem Lion and Lamb, Babes at Heart, is very good. I think it's a very complicated poetic form but you do well with it. Good luck in the contest.
gypsy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Your contest entry for Even the Odds poem Lion and Lamb, Babes at Heart, is very good. I think it's a very complicated poetic form but you do well with it. Good luck in the contest.
gypsy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece.
Comment from lauralumummu
Very nice, so serene. I am really looking forward to spring. I think your poem is interesting and a great idea that follows the writing prompt. All the best, Laura
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Very nice, so serene. I am really looking forward to spring. I think your poem is interesting and a great idea that follows the writing prompt. All the best, Laura
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece.
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this even the odds poem that ties in the leaving of winter and coming of spring with the images of a lion and the lamb. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Bill
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I like this even the odds poem that ties in the leaving of winter and coming of spring with the images of a lion and the lamb. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Bill
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An interesting evens odds here and I enjoyed the metaphors and no one can prevent changes, especially when it comes to seasons, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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An interesting evens odds here and I enjoyed the metaphors and no one can prevent changes, especially when it comes to seasons, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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This was a bit of a challenge, but I enjoyed the lion and lamb metaphors. Thanks fir the kind feedback, Dolly.
