Comment from
judelesemann
Nice poem...certainly a good portrayal of the arrival of Spring. Need to add some action, fanciful activity to your description to make it dance. You have a gift. Be blessed, Jude
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
Ok thank you! I?ll see what I can do! Appreciate very much!
Comment from
Wynter Lee
I think this poem is beautifully written and it's a favorite since it involves fantasy which I also happen to love. It's worded beautifully. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
Thank you kindly! Appreciate very much!
reply by Wynter Lee on 26-Feb-2020