A Spring Poem
The bursting of rebirth46 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! It's interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! It's interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Raul, thank you, as always!
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You're welcome
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I like the image of the does and fauns for the poem, and capturing the dew on their tongues, Typo? Either Night's darkness ebbs shorter of Nights darkness ebb shorter. Like the expression "Morn sun earlier fetched."
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I like the image of the does and fauns for the poem, and capturing the dew on their tongues, Typo? Either Night's darkness ebbs shorter of Nights darkness ebb shorter. Like the expression "Morn sun earlier fetched."
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you Darlene, I did miss that!
Comment from Mr.write_4u
I like that they excluded the common spring words. I liked this one. However, you did use the word new in your last line, you can probably correct it with "young" or something like that.
Happy writing,
Larry
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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I like that they excluded the common spring words. I liked this one. However, you did use the word new in your last line, you can probably correct it with "young" or something like that.
Happy writing,
Larry
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Oh my! what a silly error, foxed thanks
Comment from lance michaels
A beautiful poem of Spring and all its natural splendor. You painted an incredible picture with your descriptive words. I could visualize the things you described as if I were there. Excellent!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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A beautiful poem of Spring and all its natural splendor. You painted an incredible picture with your descriptive words. I could visualize the things you described as if I were there. Excellent!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you but a gaffe in my part has been corrected.
Comment from Bill Schott
This spring poem captures many of the signs that life is returning to the land and the creatures are once again on the move. Nice.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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This spring poem captures many of the signs that life is returning to the land and the creatures are once again on the move. Nice.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanks Bill
Comment from Minglement
Beautiful job with this entry for the Spring poem contest. Your word pictures and descriptive phrases paint the image repeated above. Nice job, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Beautiful job with this entry for the Spring poem contest. Your word pictures and descriptive phrases paint the image repeated above. Nice job, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Bichon
Your poem flowed exceptionally well. I liked the imagery, especially "the little fawns hunched closely to mother doe." You crafted the scenery wonderfully, great job.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Your poem flowed exceptionally well. I liked the imagery, especially "the little fawns hunched closely to mother doe." You crafted the scenery wonderfully, great job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Bichon, thank you!
Comment from Gail Denham
Hadn't thought of spring in that way "walking careful so as not to damage the new roots" - interesting poem - we have had birds all winter - but now the tree squirrel is awake - and prob. the chipmunks are next.
Good job.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Hadn't thought of spring in that way "walking careful so as not to damage the new roots" - interesting poem - we have had birds all winter - but now the tree squirrel is awake - and prob. the chipmunks are next.
Good job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Gail, thank you, I am so getting Spring fever...Ugh why a leap year?
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A Spring Poem is a fine entry for the poem for spring contest. You painted a perfect picture of spring with your words. Well done, my friend, good luck with the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A Spring Poem is a fine entry for the poem for spring contest. You painted a perfect picture of spring with your words. Well done, my friend, good luck with the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Gypsy, thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-A good poem with
many good images of spring,
as well as rhyme.
-I like the inclusion of
all of the birds and flowers.
-The last two lines are very good, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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-Very nice image.
-A good poem with
many good images of spring,
as well as rhyme.
-I like the inclusion of
all of the birds and flowers.
-The last two lines are very good, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Pam, I do thank you!
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You are very welcome.
