Viewing the World With Fresh Eyes
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "A Simple Age"The fifteen Years of My Life
23 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing the photograph of yourself with your cousin and the memories that accompany it. I enjoyed your rhymed couplets in quatrains and capturing a simpler age. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you for sharing the photograph of yourself with your cousin and the memories that accompany it. I enjoyed your rhymed couplets in quatrains and capturing a simpler age. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you for reviewing this Joan. I appreciate your comments.
Beth
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent it has good rhyme and carries the narrative well with a pleasing outcome of its delivery and a fine idea which conjures yesteryear better longings and charms.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Excellent it has good rhyme and carries the narrative well with a pleasing outcome of its delivery and a fine idea which conjures yesteryear better longings and charms.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and nice comments.
Beth
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the photo you choose to go with your poem. Is that you in it who ever it is both of those darlings are cutie.
Yes those was the days I called milk and honey the times are so different from now. I don't think it will ever return well not while I'm a live.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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I love the photo you choose to go with your poem. Is that you in it who ever it is both of those darlings are cutie.
Yes those was the days I called milk and honey the times are so different from now. I don't think it will ever return well not while I'm a live.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. Yes that is me and my first cousin who was a year younger.
Beth
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I thought that was you
your as cute as ever
Cookie
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Ahh... Thanks.
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It was my pleasure.
Cookie
Comment from RShipp
Your picture matched your poem nicely.
What lovely memories to poetically recount.
The old pictures can bring make so many great memories!
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Your picture matched your poem nicely.
What lovely memories to poetically recount.
The old pictures can bring make so many great memories!
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank your for the review and nice comments.
I was about three at the time. The boy is my first cousn.
Beth
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Memories writing prompt.
This well written and well rhymed verse tells of childhood in a simpler time.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Memories writing prompt.
This well written and well rhymed verse tells of childhood in a simpler time.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much Sharon. I appreciate the review and comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
life back in the forties
A Simple Age
Hello, my friend,
'A simple age' is a fine entry for the memories contest. The picture is adorable and the presentation is beautiful. Good job and good luck in the contest.
gypsy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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life back in the forties
A Simple Age
Hello, my friend,
'A simple age' is a fine entry for the memories contest. The picture is adorable and the presentation is beautiful. Good job and good luck in the contest.
gypsy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and the comments.
Comment from Stephanie Paige
I enjoyed reading your poem. Although I was born in 1980, some of your verses ring true to me. We would play with friends until our moms called us in. It was carefree. It has changed so much now as a parent. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Although I was born in 1980, some of your verses ring true to me. We would play with friends until our moms called us in. It was carefree. It has changed so much now as a parent. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the nice comments and the review stars.
Comment from Minglement
This was a really fun read and I enjoyed the trip back in time :) Great entry for the Memories Writing Prompt. Great photo and visuals from your word pictures, Good luck in the contest,
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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This was a really fun read and I enjoyed the trip back in time :) Great entry for the Memories Writing Prompt. Great photo and visuals from your word pictures, Good luck in the contest,
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and comments.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your rhymes are good, there's good flow, the story reads well, and the picture is a perfect accompaniment. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
I would not capitalize Ice cream--->ice cream.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your rhymes are good, there's good flow, the story reads well, and the picture is a perfect accompaniment. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
I would not capitalize Ice cream--->ice cream.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for your review and comments.
Comment from Begin Again
Just perfect! Exactly as I remember childhood...such a crime that our children and grand children will never truly know the simple life...instead technology has changed all of us...some for the good and some for the bad. Loved your poem! Smiles and hugs!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Just perfect! Exactly as I remember childhood...such a crime that our children and grand children will never truly know the simple life...instead technology has changed all of us...some for the good and some for the bad. Loved your poem! Smiles and hugs!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank ;you so much for the review and comments. It was the happy days.
