Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written twenty-word poem about a virtual place for our bodies and minds to escape to in our dreams until it is time to wake up and face life's reality.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thanks for a fine review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh to live in dreams and enjoy the fantasy of them and of course this is where many like to stay, but reality is where life is really lived and dreams are made, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thanks for a fine review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 20 Word Poem contest.
This short verse tells us of dreams and reality.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thanks for a fine review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes enjoyed reading this - it's all the rage !! so to speak - virtual reality, that is to say - however there is also that place well portrayed here in the final two lines

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thanks for a fine review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Bucketlist,

Virtual Reality is a fine 20 words poem contest entry. The presentation is beautiful. I wish you well in the contest.

Gypsy ð???

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thank you so much
,hugs, Trisha

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Trish, This is a very nice and very well written 20 Word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thanks for your reviews, Teri. They are always appreciated
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is an excellent post my friend, and a wonder that some of us haven't written about it before, that funny place between unconscious and conscious that we've all experienced, beautifully written my friend, good luck, Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020

Felicitations Roy, and many thanks for your great review.
Diversity is always fun!
Hugs, Trisha

reply by royowen on 23-Feb-2020

Well done Trisha, a word one doesn?t hear these day, like salubrious.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Such a beautiful imagination that plays throughout your words here, Trisha -- great job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

dream playgrounds --> dreams' playground OR dream's playground

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thank you for the positive review
Hugs, Trisha