Seasons
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Wisteria"Colors of each of the 4
8 total reviews
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent the imagery stirs the mind to concentrate and deliberate enhancing and clarifying the voice of the message it has a eloquent appeal and discovers the wonder of nature addressed in a personification that allows the heart to accept and desire over. It is well rounded gratifies the poetic justice of it own emotion and stands as a piece well accepted and refined it has a succinct approach and enables a quick read with a good mental impact in a short read. It has a good word choice and its flow is smooth with no major dysfunction.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Excellent the imagery stirs the mind to concentrate and deliberate enhancing and clarifying the voice of the message it has a eloquent appeal and discovers the wonder of nature addressed in a personification that allows the heart to accept and desire over. It is well rounded gratifies the poetic justice of it own emotion and stands as a piece well accepted and refined it has a succinct approach and enables a quick read with a good mental impact in a short read. It has a good word choice and its flow is smooth with no major dysfunction.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much. I?m glad you enjoyed my short poem.
Hugs, Trisha
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anytime ...
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinquain about the mixed hues that engage our sight. We see a flowery tunnel beckons us to walk and enjoy the blooms in the landscape.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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A very well-written Cinquain about the mixed hues that engage our sight. We see a flowery tunnel beckons us to walk and enjoy the blooms in the landscape.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an uplifting write and reminds me of lavender and I used to have that plant on my balcony, fine sweet words here Trisha, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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This is an uplifting write and reminds me of lavender and I used to have that plant on my balcony, fine sweet words here Trisha, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mark D. R.
I am a big fan of complementing text color with the selected artwork. In your case, it is truly perfect.
The same matches the delicateness of your text and phrasing.
Since I only write short verses, I am not a big fan of capitalization for each line. Your style may dictate another preference. As I read it, you have two main thoughts. The first two lines and then the last three. So periods or squiggles may be useful to set them apart.
Mark
P.S. IMHO script italic font should be banned from FS text choices. It is difficult to read and methinks it actually detracts from the presentation and possibly FS reviews.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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I am a big fan of complementing text color with the selected artwork. In your case, it is truly perfect.
The same matches the delicateness of your text and phrasing.
Since I only write short verses, I am not a big fan of capitalization for each line. Your style may dictate another preference. As I read it, you have two main thoughts. The first two lines and then the last three. So periods or squiggles may be useful to set them apart.
Mark
P.S. IMHO script italic font should be banned from FS text choices. It is difficult to read and methinks it actually detracts from the presentation and possibly FS reviews.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanks Marc I will consider your suggestion
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
With those beautiful colors, I am attracted. If the blooms create an arch to walk beneath, what a heavenly path that would be. Your short poem and beautiful art are enticing.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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With those beautiful colors, I am attracted. If the blooms create an arch to walk beneath, what a heavenly path that would be. Your short poem and beautiful art are enticing.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Darlene Franklin
What a lovely poem describing a stunning picture. It reminds of Monaco Avenue in Denver in the springtime, where the trees reach and meet overhead during the summer season.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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What a lovely poem describing a stunning picture. It reminds of Monaco Avenue in Denver in the springtime, where the trees reach and meet overhead during the summer season.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
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You're welcome!
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Have a great day!
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Bucketlist: beautiful flowery bridge and flowers. I like the colors
and the invite to enjoy the blooms. Good syllable count. Can't
wait for spring. Our snow is melting day x day. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Bucketlist: beautiful flowery bridge and flowers. I like the colors
and the invite to enjoy the blooms. Good syllable count. Can't
wait for spring. Our snow is melting day x day. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from moongirlwriter
Yes, I have walked through such a tunnel. . .and it somehow takes us away into another space. We can get lost in reality, just for a moment or two. God's beauty in such places simply melts our heart. Good luck with this piece.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Yes, I have walked through such a tunnel. . .and it somehow takes us away into another space. We can get lost in reality, just for a moment or two. God's beauty in such places simply melts our heart. Good luck with this piece.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha