Life of a Wave
The life, evolution and death of an ocean wave.16 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
A very lovely poem that's elegantly written. The words flow easily with clear description of the author's intent. I really enjoyed reading your poetry. Take care! Stay safe! Stay healthy!
Patty
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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A very lovely poem that's elegantly written. The words flow easily with clear description of the author's intent. I really enjoyed reading your poetry. Take care! Stay safe! Stay healthy!
Patty
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review. You be well also.
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you're welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the life of a wave on the big ocean that starts with a drop of water or maybe a tear and grow until it ends up in the ocean just to come breaking at our feet and the process starts all over again.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem about the life of a wave on the big ocean that starts with a drop of water or maybe a tear and grow until it ends up in the ocean just to come breaking at our feet and the process starts all over again.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great rating.
Comment from amada
I was taken by your words from the first line. What a marvelous way to describe the creation of the sea...and so it went. I also admire the first line coinciding with the last one...about the lady's tear.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I was taken by your words from the first line. What a marvelous way to describe the creation of the sea...and so it went. I also admire the first line coinciding with the last one...about the lady's tear.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Your last stanza "Depression evolves to a tropical storm; the storm to a hurricane;
landfall occurs amidst driving winds; as well as torrential rain.
Lying atop a ruined beachfront deck; unable to instill further fear;
Life ends infinitesimally; indistinguishable as rain or a lady's tear."
Life ends like a lady tear - that's an amazing and row emotion captured in amidst. Your poem is very sad but is aligning with the spirit of the fear all over the world. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Your last stanza "Depression evolves to a tropical storm; the storm to a hurricane;
landfall occurs amidst driving winds; as well as torrential rain.
Lying atop a ruined beachfront deck; unable to instill further fear;
Life ends infinitesimally; indistinguishable as rain or a lady's tear."
Life ends like a lady tear - that's an amazing and row emotion captured in amidst. Your poem is very sad but is aligning with the spirit of the fear all over the world. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The drop that begins soon becomes swelled if it meets the sea. Here you have given it a true life in this enjoyable poem. It travels far, and deep and eventually ends in a hurricane. Well done very descriptive words used wisely.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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The drop that begins soon becomes swelled if it meets the sea. Here you have given it a true life in this enjoyable poem. It travels far, and deep and eventually ends in a hurricane. Well done very descriptive words used wisely.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the "The Life of a..." writing prompt.
This well written verse tells of the growth of a wave.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the "The Life of a..." writing prompt.
This well written verse tells of the growth of a wave.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the way you start this and how you've caused it to continually build up like a wave does. It almost seems like to me that you've wrote it this way on purpose. Well played! I love what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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I like the way you start this and how you've caused it to continually build up like a wave does. It almost seems like to me that you've wrote it this way on purpose. Well played! I love what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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You nailed it! Thanks for the kind words.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I like your poem on the life of the ocean wave. It was interesting to read and had a smooth flow which guided you to the end. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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I like your poem on the life of the ocean wave. It was interesting to read and had a smooth flow which guided you to the end. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind words.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thanks!
Comment from Ricky1024
This is Well written rich and semen imagery it red Well Road well with no grammar issues injective object the contents were both excellent exceptional while descriptive measures lined up perfectly thanks dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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This is Well written rich and semen imagery it red Well Road well with no grammar issues injective object the contents were both excellent exceptional while descriptive measures lined up perfectly thanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to review.
