One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from jaydub99
I really liked this. I am a big comic fan so it was a topic I was familiar with. Your poem was spot on technically but really hit the mark in its capture of the Joker. I appreciate the write up as well as I have yet to see the movie. Good luck in the contest. Great submission.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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I really liked this. I am a big comic fan so it was a topic I was familiar with. Your poem was spot on technically but really hit the mark in its capture of the Joker. I appreciate the write up as well as I have yet to see the movie. Good luck in the contest. Great submission.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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thank you very much for the excellent review :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That poor man, betrayed by his mother and society. It might have been the boyfriend that abused him but his mother allowed it. If she was scared of him, she should have just run away with her son. So sad to read things like this. I hope the boyfriend was jailed. Your poem tells the whole story, in just those few words we can seen the child crying and the torment he suffered. I'm afraid of clowns! Never liked them as a child. Well done, and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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That poor man, betrayed by his mother and society. It might have been the boyfriend that abused him but his mother allowed it. If she was scared of him, she should have just run away with her son. So sad to read things like this. I hope the boyfriend was jailed. Your poem tells the whole story, in just those few words we can seen the child crying and the torment he suffered. I'm afraid of clowns! Never liked them as a child. Well done, and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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thank you very much for the excellent review :)
Comment from kahpot
A very well written and presented short work, I have not yet seen this film but now I am looking forward to it after reading this excellent 5-7-5 poem and your notes, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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A very well written and presented short work, I have not yet seen this film but now I am looking forward to it after reading this excellent 5-7-5 poem and your notes, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the review 😊
Comment from Dancemom
This is a well-written 575 for the movie contest. I have seen and enjoyed the film as well. I particularly enjoyed the tv show part with DeNiro.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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This is a well-written 575 for the movie contest. I have seen and enjoyed the film as well. I particularly enjoyed the tv show part with DeNiro.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the review 😊
Comment from bhogg
I Haven't seen the movie yet, plan to this morning. Despite that, I found your 5-7-5 to be quite good, rather or not it fit the movie. Well done. Hard to convey such deep thought in such a short format!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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I Haven't seen the movie yet, plan to this morning. Despite that, I found your 5-7-5 to be quite good, rather or not it fit the movie. Well done. Hard to convey such deep thought in such a short format!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for the review
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
How tragic and how true to life. So many with mental struggles suffer from the treatment meant to help them. How often are they misdiagnosed or lost in the shuffle?
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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How tragic and how true to life. So many with mental struggles suffer from the treatment meant to help them. How often are they misdiagnosed or lost in the shuffle?
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Yeah, you've summed up the mind of the joker beautifully. I don't think that sanity ever resided there. It would not be welcome. He probably has crazy brain antibodies that lash out and destroy sane thoughts. This is really good and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Yeah, you've summed up the mind of the joker beautifully. I don't think that sanity ever resided there. It would not be welcome. He probably has crazy brain antibodies that lash out and destroy sane thoughts. This is really good and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the review
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The picture and the words, speak loudly. The Author's notes are a composition of a wonderful review for the movie. Your empathetic narrative compliments your presentation deeply.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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The picture and the words, speak loudly. The Author's notes are a composition of a wonderful review for the movie. Your empathetic narrative compliments your presentation deeply.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Therese Caron
I am not much of a moviegoer, but your description really makes me want to see this one.First of all, you did a great job with your dark eerie poem. Then your authors notes added a lot of explanation that actually added to your poem. I couldn't get the video to play, maybe my iPad was just having a bad day. This is a great presentation. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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I am not much of a moviegoer, but your description really makes me want to see this one.First of all, you did a great job with your dark eerie poem. Then your authors notes added a lot of explanation that actually added to your poem. I couldn't get the video to play, maybe my iPad was just having a bad day. This is a great presentation. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Awesome subject for your 5-7-5 movie contest! I loved when Heath played the Joker in Dark Knight! And the guy who plays the Joker in the new Gotham series is perfect for the role! You did an excellent job portraying the mind of the Joker in this! xoxo
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Awesome subject for your 5-7-5 movie contest! I loved when Heath played the Joker in Dark Knight! And the guy who plays the Joker in the new Gotham series is perfect for the role! You did an excellent job portraying the mind of the Joker in this! xoxo
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
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My pleasure!