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Lovely Daydreams

An 8 word poem

8 total reviews 
Comment from Mia Twysted
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I just love the picture you have chosen to go with this piece. Animals really know how to let it all go and relax. I think this piece in a way mirrors them and they give way to the peace and quiet of sleep more then most humans do.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a sweet natured presentation and I enjoyed the drowsiness as we drop off to sleep, these bears know what they're doing! He he he, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020

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Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
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Very good 8 word poem.
You used just the right words to create the perfect thought. The illustration was also perfect.
Good job,
Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh, I do look forward to summer days just like this.... think I'll skip the bears, though - maybe I'll let the cat out on the patio or something...LOL! ;) A wonderfully soothing and almost mesmerizing offering in just 8 words.. great job! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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Comment from Dr. Nad
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You have chosen a wonderful picture to depict a poem of serenity and tranquility. Your subjects in the picture are indulging in a necessity of life, sleep.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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Comment from Raul1
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I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! I have enjoyed reading this poem. Beautiful piece of poetry. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend

I like your poem.
In only eight words you managed to say so much. You have the right amount of lines. I wish you well in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Excellent image.
-You have used your
eight words very creatively.
-Effective imagery and personification.
-You paint a vivid word picture
about the effect of daydreams.
-The mood is mellow as
"drowsiness overcomes thought."
-A good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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    Thank you Pam!
reply by Pam (respa) on 18-Feb-2020
    You are welcome.