A Letter
The ending of a serious flaw, forbidden love affair.17 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
This is an interesting poem. I have enjoyed reading this poem. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job. Good luck in the contest! I like it.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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This is an interesting poem. I have enjoyed reading this poem. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job. Good luck in the contest! I like it.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Raoul, thank you so much for this nice review!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I've heard that this kind of love feels and seems like the sweetest, but, the end of it can lead to disaster on many fronts. I love the message conveyed in this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I've heard that this kind of love feels and seems like the sweetest, but, the end of it can lead to disaster on many fronts. I love the message conveyed in this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Jeffrey
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about falling in love with someone who are forbidden because he belongs to someone else and the once cannot come bro fulfillment.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about falling in love with someone who are forbidden because he belongs to someone else and the once cannot come bro fulfillment.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Sandra, thank you for your comment. Appreciated!
Comment from Tami Urbanek
A nice poem that shows deep passion between two people who cannot be together or whom should not be together. You paint the picture well. I also enjoyed the rhyming.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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A nice poem that shows deep passion between two people who cannot be together or whom should not be together. You paint the picture well. I also enjoyed the rhyming.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Tami, thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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13thpoet, lots of thank you's for lots of stars.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
The ending of a love affair is never great. If it was true and deep. I know how it feels. This is a fine entry for the 'im not perfect'contest. Good luck
Gypsy
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend
The ending of a love affair is never great. If it was true and deep. I know how it feels. This is a fine entry for the 'im not perfect'contest. Good luck
Gypsy
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Gypsy blue Rose, thank you for another five stars! Very much appreciated.
Comment from Boogienights
It's sad when love comes along a second time..but you're already committed to someone. I'm sure it happens much more then you think it would. A very well written poen for the contest..good luck to you.
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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It's sad when love comes along a second time..but you're already committed to someone. I'm sure it happens much more then you think it would. A very well written poen for the contest..good luck to you.
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Boogienights, thank you so much for your comment!
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Thank you very much, for your understanding review.
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Once again: thank you very much.
