Comment from country ranch writer

Exceptional

Well if he had his act together he wouldn't have had to worry about his probation in the first place. Lucky for him he made it home in the nick of time!

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020

Thank you for the review and compliments. Blessings to you.

Comment from Mr.write_4u

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this one. Sounds like we're on the same page when it comes to abuse of authority. It read smoothly. I like how you created visuals, and her sense of urgency turning calm. Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing,
Larry

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020

Thank you for the Support and Encouragement on this poem offering. Blessings to you.

Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

Well, she had an adventurous night! That's an interesting poem form too... with four-rhyme lines and then a bit of a scramble at the end. Here are a few typos...
girlfriends she
girlfriend's; she

curfews
curfew's


good bye
goodbye

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020

Thanks for Reading and Rating this poem offering. Blessings to you, I will correct any errors.