Springtime Was My Muse
Does Spring inspire you to write?28 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I love the artwork and
the presentation to go with it.
-The form sounds complicated,
but you wrote a good poem.
-The imagery paints a
vivid word picture of spring.
-I like the opening line
and "caravan of vibrant colors."
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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-I love the artwork and
the presentation to go with it.
-The form sounds complicated,
but you wrote a good poem.
-The imagery paints a
vivid word picture of spring.
-I like the opening line
and "caravan of vibrant colors."
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I am so pleased you enjoyed the artwork and my poem, Pam. The Hazel does sound complicated until you try it. I enjoyed the challenge.
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You are very welcome. I enjoy challenges, too, so I will think about it. I will put the info. in my file.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem inspired by Springtime and the muse loves it too and bring wonderful images of colorful blooms that bring the garden to life.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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A very well-written poem inspired by Springtime and the muse loves it too and bring wonderful images of colorful blooms that bring the garden to life.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing SPRINGTIME WAS MY MUSE, Sandra.
Comment from Sallyo
Lovely; short, sweet and charming, and the image of spring as a watering can is so apt... and yet, not many would think of it. I do applaud a poet who knows when to stop, probably because I often don't.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Lovely; short, sweet and charming, and the image of spring as a watering can is so apt... and yet, not many would think of it. I do applaud a poet who knows when to stop, probably because I often don't.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I am so pleased you like my short Hazel so much, Sallyo. This form is different from most you see on FanStory, but fun to write. Thank you so much for those six bright stars.
Comment from royowen
I think after a long, cold northern hemisphere summer, how we could not be inspired to write. There are so many wonderful things to write about, and you've done a marvellous job with this wonderfully upbeat poem glorifying spring, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I think after a long, cold northern hemisphere summer, how we could not be inspired to write. There are so many wonderful things to write about, and you've done a marvellous job with this wonderfully upbeat poem glorifying spring, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for your kind praise of SPRINGTIME, Roy.
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That?s right, well done
Comment from June Sargent
Yes, I do find spring inspirational with the colorful flowers, the sounds of birds chirping, the scent of new grass, the warmth of the sun on my skin. A powerful muse indeed!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Yes, I do find spring inspirational with the colorful flowers, the sounds of birds chirping, the scent of new grass, the warmth of the sun on my skin. A powerful muse indeed!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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There is nothing more inspirational to me than Nature in the Spring. I am delighted you enjoyed my short poem, June.
Comment from Boogienights
Thos is very nice. It makes me think of gardens and warmth, gentle rains. Here in minnesota we seem to have the winter that never ends. It's snowing right now! Hurry spring. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thos is very nice. It makes me think of gardens and warmth, gentle rains. Here in minnesota we seem to have the winter that never ends. It's snowing right now! Hurry spring. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I do not envy you people in Minnesota. I hope Spring comes early for us all this year. Many thanks for sharing my short poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the joy of spring to my eyes here straight from your heart and gave me an excitement inside as I can't wait for her to arrive, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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You brought the joy of spring to my eyes here straight from your heart and gave me an excitement inside as I can't wait for her to arrive, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I am so pleased I could bring the joy of spring to your heart, Dolly. Many thanks for sharing and your kind praise.
Comment from JP Writer
I most enjoyed the image of spring being a watering can, watering you and helping transform your thoughts into verse. Your rhymes themselves were clever (verse and coerce; watering can and caravan), but the one thing you might work on is the rhyme structure. I could not find their pattern. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I most enjoyed the image of spring being a watering can, watering you and helping transform your thoughts into verse. Your rhymes themselves were clever (verse and coerce; watering can and caravan), but the one thing you might work on is the rhyme structure. I could not find their pattern. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed my use of a watering can as a metaphor for Spring's inspiration. Since you wrote this review, I added in my notes an explanation of what a Hazel is. There you will see what the rhyme scheme is supposed to be.
