Springtime Was My Muse
Does Spring inspire you to write?28 total reviews
Comment from lauralumummu
This is lovely and the words come alive in springtime images and we read your well-written poem. I am so looking forward to spring. All the best, Laura. ^_^
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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This is lovely and the words come alive in springtime images and we read your well-written poem. I am so looking forward to spring. All the best, Laura. ^_^
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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I am eagerly awaiting Spring, too. Many thanks for sharing SPRINGTIME and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely personification of Spring - and it's not you who is watering but Spring herself is watering you and bringing to life your creative verses. I remember how you learned the joy of gardening from your grandmother. She probably opened your eyes to those "caravan of colors." Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Lovely personification of Spring - and it's not you who is watering but Spring herself is watering you and bringing to life your creative verses. I remember how you learned the joy of gardening from your grandmother. She probably opened your eyes to those "caravan of colors." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Indeed Grandma did. Thank you so much, lyenochka, for sharing SPRINGTIME and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from BeasPeas
What a lovely post. I love the image and the poem told from the viewpoint of the flowers in the garden. This is an interesting form, nicely composed. I like verse/coerce. Rhymes perfectly. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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What a lovely post. I love the image and the poem told from the viewpoint of the flowers in the garden. This is an interesting form, nicely composed. I like verse/coerce. Rhymes perfectly. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed my Hazel, Marilyn. Many thanks for your kind praise of its imagery and rhymes. Rod
Comment from Raul1
I like this Hazel poem you wrote. Interesting and unique. I have enjoyed the Spring in the poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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I like this Hazel poem you wrote. Interesting and unique. I have enjoyed the Spring in the poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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I am delighted you like my Hazel. The form is fun to work with. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
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You're welcome
Comment from Minglement
This is a lovely write for the Spring,,,Lovely Spring contest. I like the imagery of spring as a watering can, nurturing your inspiration and transforming thoughts to verse. well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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This is a lovely write for the Spring,,,Lovely Spring contest. I like the imagery of spring as a watering can, nurturing your inspiration and transforming thoughts to verse. well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review of SPRINGTIME WAS MY MUSE. Rod
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You're most welcome
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You are most welcome, Rod.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for sharing SPRINGTIME WAS MY MUSE. Rod
Comment from Auryn Eisley
What an inspiration springtime is! You have perfectly captured everything hopeful and beautiful about the emerging springtime. I really liked the rhythm of your poem and your fantastic imagery. Thank for teaching a newbie here on FS a different style of writing!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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What an inspiration springtime is! You have perfectly captured everything hopeful and beautiful about the emerging springtime. I really liked the rhythm of your poem and your fantastic imagery. Thank for teaching a newbie here on FS a different style of writing!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed the poem and the new form. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Natalie Goodwin
This is an excellent poem for the contest. I like the image of spring as a sprinkling can that waters creativity. Excellent descriptions. Good work. Have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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This is an excellent poem for the contest. I like the image of spring as a sprinkling can that waters creativity. Excellent descriptions. Good work. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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I am so pleased you like my sprinkling can metaphor. Thank you, Natalie, for your very kind praise of SPRINGTIME. Rod
Comment from Gideon300
I enjoyed this poem because it makes me think of my backyard which I transformed last year, from a weed patch to a lovely place of flowers and nature. It was a lot of work but what a change. Thanks for this refreshing poem, I can almost smell the flowers through your words.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed this poem because it makes me think of my backyard which I transformed last year, from a weed patch to a lovely place of flowers and nature. It was a lot of work but what a change. Thanks for this refreshing poem, I can almost smell the flowers through your words.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I admire all the work you did to transform the weed patch into a garden you enjoy. My wife spends the winter planning her garden and I thrive on the results. Many thanks for sharing SPRINGTIME. I am delighted you enjoyed it.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. Since Spring signifies new life, it does inspire people I think. We're able to get out and about more. I also think that with us personally being out there gazing at life coming forth, inspiration grows also. I believe that cold and gloomy weather can stifle this. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I like this. Since Spring signifies new life, it does inspire people I think. We're able to get out and about more. I also think that with us personally being out there gazing at life coming forth, inspiration grows also. I believe that cold and gloomy weather can stifle this. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I do find COLOR which you don?t see in winter inspires me come spring. Many thanks for sharing my hazel, Jeffrey.
