Caught on the Bayou
A 5 Line Entry21 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a short simple love poem. It seems you wrote the poem for the picture which matches the words perfectly.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy, June.
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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This is a short simple love poem. It seems you wrote the poem for the picture which matches the words perfectly.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy, June.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much! Always nice to hear from you.
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize for this whimsical delight. Thrashing heart earns your stars in itself! Hope this is your true love story. Glad I caught up to this one. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Congrats on your prize for this whimsical delight. Thrashing heart earns your stars in itself! Hope this is your true love story. Glad I caught up to this one. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much! It was a pleasant surprise to see I placed second. Bill did take me fishng, but it wasn't on a hoat on the bayou. Just sounded more poetic.
Comment from Gail Denham
Ha! Out there in that snake/aligator infested brown water place? Just kidding - but I don't think I"d like to go there at night. Perhaps a nice restaurant that over looks the bayou?
Cute poem.
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Ha! Out there in that snake/aligator infested brown water place? Just kidding - but I don't think I"d like to go there at night. Perhaps a nice restaurant that over looks the bayou?
Cute poem.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
Comment from Gideon300
And that has got to not only be a good poem but a sweet talking pick up line.
Such a poignant use of words that makes ones heart skips a beat. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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And that has got to not only be a good poem but a sweet talking pick up line.
Such a poignant use of words that makes ones heart skips a beat. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you for sharing insightful comments!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Awwww... you just give me a little chill, June!! ;) This is simply lovely!! ;) Love your employment of this form as a love poem - and your presentation is so reassuringly soothing!! :) Hope you enjoyed Valentine's Day last week with your 'best catch'! ;) Best of luck! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Awwww... you just give me a little chill, June!! ;) This is simply lovely!! ;) Love your employment of this form as a love poem - and your presentation is so reassuringly soothing!! :) Hope you enjoyed Valentine's Day last week with your 'best catch'! ;) Best of luck! :) Yvette
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thanks ever so much for your enthusiastic review! Means a lot to me.
Comment from Boogienights
This is so sweet. Might I just add that it's much better than a fish. What a delightful poem and picture, and such romance tucked into 5 small lines..nicely done.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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This is so sweet. Might I just add that it's much better than a fish. What a delightful poem and picture, and such romance tucked into 5 small lines..nicely done.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece! It?s appreciated.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Whoa! This has an underlying hint of steamy to it! Love it! I bet the summer night was not the only "hot" thing going on! hahaha! you did an awesome poem here, my friend! :)
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Whoa! This has an underlying hint of steamy to it! Love it! I bet the summer night was not the only "hot" thing going on! hahaha! you did an awesome poem here, my friend! :)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. I appreciate it.
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xoxoxo
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5 Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely, romantic imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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This is a very well written 5 Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely, romantic imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. I appreciate it.
Comment from country ranch writer
Very lovely caring photo of two lovers on th bayou. Very well presented and best of wishes in the contest. Very well done.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Very lovely caring photo of two lovers on th bayou. Very well presented and best of wishes in the contest. Very well done.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. I appreciate it.
Comment from RodG
When I look at your photo and after reading your five-liner, I can almost hear Linda Ronstadt crooning "Blue Bayou." A delightful scene described here. Rod
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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When I look at your photo and after reading your five-liner, I can almost hear Linda Ronstadt crooning "Blue Bayou." A delightful scene described here. Rod
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Actually I was thinking of that song when I wrote this piece. Glad you enjoyed it.