satin drifts
a 5 7 5 poem4 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
It is so good to hear from you. Congratulations on the second place for this contest. You deserve it... it's so good. I love the poem AND the presentation. Beautiful picture.
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Gypsy
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hello, my friend,
It is so good to hear from you. Congratulations on the second place for this contest. You deserve it... it's so good. I love the poem AND the presentation. Beautiful picture.
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Gypsy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Cheers, thanks for the review. 4:30 am and I am heading down to the keys,,,fishing, not wishing. Cheers, judester
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Oh! What a nice surprise! I like this poem a lot. The title is a gem, the 5-7-5 is perfect, the text of the poem is enchanting and the artwork is very well chosen. The last line: "fox track tapestry" did it for me. Lovely!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Oh! What a nice surprise! I like this poem a lot. The title is a gem, the 5-7-5 is perfect, the text of the poem is enchanting and the artwork is very well chosen. The last line: "fox track tapestry" did it for me. Lovely!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thanks for the encouraging review, I love the artist and am thrilled when I do find tracks, cheers, judester
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Thank you, Judester, for your beautiful poem.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5poem for the contest
with wonderful imagery and connection in the first two lines
and a fine satori reflection that expands the thought in line three.
Excellent choice of art work
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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This is an excellent 5-7-5poem for the contest
with wonderful imagery and connection in the first two lines
and a fine satori reflection that expands the thought in line three.
Excellent choice of art work
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thanks for the insightful review. You encourage me. I have learned so much on this site. Cheers, have a peaceful Sunday.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-I really like you poem,
which is a good haiku.
-Effective nature and
seasonal imagery.
-I like the fabric
references, as well.
-A very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest;
a very deserving entry!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-I really like you poem,
which is a good haiku.
-Effective nature and
seasonal imagery.
-I like the fabric
references, as well.
-A very good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest;
a very deserving entry!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thanks for the ever insightful review. I do live in a windy area and the drifts are beautifully edged. Have a peaceful Sunday.
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You are very welcome. You have a good Sunday, too. I look forward to learning who you are:)
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haha, the big reveal at the finish line.
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This is true:)
