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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I was told by expert haiku writers that haiku involves nature. This is more a 5-7-5 but it is exceptionally done in context and message. It is our last door
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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I was told by expert haiku writers that haiku involves nature. This is more a 5-7-5 but it is exceptionally done in context and message. It is our last door
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about doors in our lives closing as another is opening. We sometimes are completely blindsided by the closed door that we cannot see the open door.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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A very well-written poem about doors in our lives closing as another is opening. We sometimes are completely blindsided by the closed door that we cannot see the open door.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write and the final door we stumble through is when we say all our goodbyes, a chilling write on the the one hand and then heavenly on the other, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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A poignant write and the final door we stumble through is when we say all our goodbyes, a chilling write on the the one hand and then heavenly on the other, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
This is a poem that provides fuel to keep on keeping on having faith that we will get to that last special door and so don't give up getting there, keep on with those doors. I lovely motto here.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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This is a poem that provides fuel to keep on keeping on having faith that we will get to that last special door and so don't give up getting there, keep on with those doors. I lovely motto here.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Awww! Surely tomorrow will be very bright! What an inspiration! The cover image is everything about optimisim! Great job you've done, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Awww! Surely tomorrow will be very bright! What an inspiration! The cover image is everything about optimisim! Great job you've done, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a beautiful haiku with a message just for you. The message is don't give up, don't give in. Don't believe anything that pulls you away from your dream of fulfilling God's perfect plan for you. You've got more in you and you can see it come to fruition.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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This is a beautiful haiku with a message just for you. The message is don't give up, don't give in. Don't believe anything that pulls you away from your dream of fulfilling God's perfect plan for you. You've got more in you and you can see it come to fruition.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Wow! Thank you for a super review and stars
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is the truth. You said it so well. We go through life taking chance after chance. Changing our paths by going through different doors until we find that last one that leads us to an end and a new beginning.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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This is the truth. You said it so well. We go through life taking chance after chance. Changing our paths by going through different doors until we find that last one that leads us to an end and a new beginning.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
This is a nice 5/7/5 poem but it's not a haiku. Haiku are poems about nature. The first two lines connect grammatically and the last line is a juxtaposition aha moment.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend
This is a nice 5/7/5 poem but it's not a haiku. Haiku are poems about nature. The first two lines connect grammatically and the last line is a juxtaposition aha moment.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Who created nature? Doors are metaphorical, and God is part of nature! Thanks for your review. I cannot find anything which says it?s nature exclusively. We can agree to disagree
Hugs, Trisha
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You're right
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Thanks but it?s no big deal
Comment from Y. M. Roger
That is a wonderful 5-7-5 with such a beautiful vision of life and beyond, Trisha -- just inspiring and reassuring!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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That is a wonderful 5-7-5 with such a beautiful vision of life and beyond, Trisha -- just inspiring and reassuring!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you