When Love Was Taken
An Acrostic- Loop Poem26 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a heartfelt lost love, broken heart poem. A destroyed relationship hurts to the quick but humans are resilient and do make surprising comebacks.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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This is a heartfelt lost love, broken heart poem. A destroyed relationship hurts to the quick but humans are resilient and do make surprising comebacks.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
An Acrostic- Loop Poem
When Love Was Taken
Hello, kahpot,
A fine acrostic loop poem. When Love Was Taken is a wonderful expression of grief. I know how it feels to be lonely and to lose someone. Well done.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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An Acrostic- Loop Poem
When Love Was Taken
Hello, kahpot,
A fine acrostic loop poem. When Love Was Taken is a wonderful expression of grief. I know how it feels to be lonely and to lose someone. Well done.
Gypsy
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you Gypsy, for your wonderful review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clever work with such a challenging form--an acrostic that loops! Never heard of that before. You must enjoy the challenge of palindromes--"ANNA" being about the most complex such I can come up with. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Clever work with such a challenging form--an acrostic that loops! Never heard of that before. You must enjoy the challenge of palindromes--"ANNA" being about the most complex such I can come up with. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you Liz, yes a challenge is good for the mind, your comments are much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Louise Michelle
You put a lot of energy into this poem and it shows. An acrostic loop poem - what a terrific idea. The content was engaging and you held my interest from beginning to end. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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You put a lot of energy into this poem and it shows. An acrostic loop poem - what a terrific idea. The content was engaging and you held my interest from beginning to end. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a clever verse. Being Acrostic and a loop poem is not an easy accomplishment.
The amazing artwork is a good match for this.
Well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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I think this is a clever verse. Being Acrostic and a loop poem is not an easy accomplishment.
The amazing artwork is a good match for this.
Well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is really good. I like the way you wrote the Acrostic: Loop.
the words flow so easily and it makes the poem interesting to read. /The artwork is also interesting and pretty too. Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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This is really good. I like the way you wrote the Acrostic: Loop.
the words flow so easily and it makes the poem interesting to read. /The artwork is also interesting and pretty too. Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow, sir -- so this was a whole heck of a lot of work for your mind and your heart and your pen.... awesome! And not only is it a line-to-line loop, but it is a beginning-to-end loop while being an Acrostic.... Oh, yeah, sir: these stars are yours!! WONDERFUL!! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Wow, sir -- so this was a whole heck of a lot of work for your mind and your heart and your pen.... awesome! And not only is it a line-to-line loop, but it is a beginning-to-end loop while being an Acrostic.... Oh, yeah, sir: these stars are yours!! WONDERFUL!! :) Yvette
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Wow! back, A travelled write and I thank you for recognising, the mind is still, the pen is full, the heart is empty, Many, Many thanks ****kahpot
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Wow! Brilliant work here the way you started the next line with the same word previous line ended in. That was not an easy task, I'm sure!
Great job on this!
xoxo
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Wow! Brilliant work here the way you started the next line with the same word previous line ended in. That was not an easy task, I'm sure!
Great job on this!
xoxo
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review and comments, much appreciated*****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Well kahpot in the time I have known you on FanStory you were always the one to take up a challenge, and then make it doubly challenging. This fine acrostic loop poem is no exception to your personal dedication.
It is a fine poem about healing a grieving soul and your presentation and poem are both terrific.
Just one typo:
Times for sorrow to be carried with acceptence (acceptance)
I can't wait to read your next challenge. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Well kahpot in the time I have known you on FanStory you were always the one to take up a challenge, and then make it doubly challenging. This fine acrostic loop poem is no exception to your personal dedication.
It is a fine poem about healing a grieving soul and your presentation and poem are both terrific.
Just one typo:
Times for sorrow to be carried with acceptence (acceptance)
I can't wait to read your next challenge. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Thank you so very much for your encouragement and help, I have taken all your poetry and comments on board and hope I will continue to improve, many, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"When Love Was Taken", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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"When Love Was Taken", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review, very much appreciated****kahpot
******kahpot, you're very welcome.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
