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Just a Nosh or two...

Honoring National Snack Food Month

10 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL- spandex is right... you've have officially sparked a pantry raid!! :) A wonderful offering for the February Fun Contest, Martie -- thanx so much for joining in the Fun! :) Congrats on 3rd Place!! ;) Take care and have a great rest of the week! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the February Fun Poem writing prompt.
This fun verse tells of 29 days of snacks.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from dragonpoet
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This witty poem is definitely about overindulgence. Taking the month long holiday too seriously seems to be bad for both your physcial and mental health.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind words and good wishes.
reply by dragonpoet on 17-Feb-2020
    My problem.
    dp
Comment from Minglement
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This entry for the February Fun poem contest is such great fun! You had me salivating at all the great treats! You managed to get your view across and keep a nice rhythm and rhyme scheme. Loved it :)

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Thank you!
reply by Minglement on 17-Feb-2020
    You're welcome - my favorite :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written February fun poem about National Snack Food Month. After the holidays and the budget pinch we sometimes have to survive on dry crackers to get through the month.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the review.
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
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Love your poem. It reflects me, not long ago.
Some of us have a tendency to crash during Thanksgiving, Christmas and Valentine's and diet the rest.
I thought you wrote well and the rhymes and rhythm was also good.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind words.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and well written poem you have penned for snack food month. You used very good descriptive words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind words and good wishes.
Comment from moongirlwriter
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Very cute. . .and only 29 days to celebrate. I'll have a glass of wine instead. So many snacks named, I recognize them all. . .just haven't tasted them all. Maybe I'm missing something? But I do so love ice cream. . .because it slides right down. :)

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the review and rating.
reply by moongirlwriter on 15-Feb-2020
    :)
Comment from Stephanie Paige
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I absolutely love this poem. It was very humorous and I found myself laughing through the whole thing. Your rhymes are not forced at all. I even loved the nod to the Yiddish language. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Thanks! It was easy: I love to eat and I love to rhyme.
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Thanks. Have a sparkling Friday.