My Being Knows You
The years have given us familiarity beyond speech...58 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
What a sweet message. Lovers may separate, but there are things that we can touch and think about that will bring them nearer. Go ahead an feel sappy, and thank you for sharing it.
Love the picture. It feels like a fairie setting, or a dream.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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What a sweet message. Lovers may separate, but there are things that we can touch and think about that will bring them nearer. Go ahead an feel sappy, and thank you for sharing it.
Love the picture. It feels like a fairie setting, or a dream.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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LOL!! Yeah, always thought Valentine's was a 'weird' holiday... shouldn't you do little special things all year long? C'est la vie.... at least it's an excise to get me sappy... LOL! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from kahpot
I thought that the last two lines may affect the flow with them both starting with the same word but this is not the case, I read this several times and it flowed very well with the clever use of rhyme, love the artwork, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I thought that the last two lines may affect the flow with them both starting with the same word but this is not the case, I read this several times and it flowed very well with the clever use of rhyme, love the artwork, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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So you had me worried in the beginning there... so glad it wrapped up okay - LOL!! ;) Love your honesty, my friend, thanx for that always!! ;) Take care down/over there and enjoy the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a lovely Valentine's Day poem. I especially like the mention of "touch" and "thought" as well as the rhyming with "naught." The artwork is fantastic and suits you, and the theme of the poem, well. Thank you for sharing.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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This is a lovely Valentine's Day poem. I especially like the mention of "touch" and "thought" as well as the rhyming with "naught." The artwork is fantastic and suits you, and the theme of the poem, well. Thank you for sharing.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Jesse! ;) Valentine's day is a 'weird' holiday (should do special stuff year round) but I use it for my one day to be a bit sappy as I said... !! :) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
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Hello Yvette.
I agree about Valentine's day. It's like Christmas - people should be giving and merry all year round.
I hope you aren't in the middle of that bomb storm I've been reading about. You take care as well.
Jesse
Comment from Sugarray77
What a lovely and romantic verse Yvette. The fading colors in your font make a statement of something waning... perhaps fading into nothing, but you resurrect it by stating... endures... changing everything. So well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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What a lovely and romantic verse Yvette. The fading colors in your font make a statement of something waning... perhaps fading into nothing, but you resurrect it by stating... endures... changing everything. So well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Melissa! ;) The sense of truly knowing someone beyond words is something that can only be experienced...but what a fulfilling and comfortable experience it is!! :) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Pinder
Oh, that's so sweet and sappy. I wouldn't call it sappy except you already did. Great Valentine's poem that is written with great creativity, coloring and wording. Bill
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Oh, that's so sweet and sappy. I wouldn't call it sappy except you already did. Great Valentine's poem that is written with great creativity, coloring and wording. Bill
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Bill! ;) The sense of truly knowing someone beyond words is something that can only be experienced...but what a fulfilling and comfortable experience it is!! :) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from juliaSjames
The tender lyricism of this write is enhanced by the beautiful end rhyme of naught and thought and by the touches of alliteration.
A love poem for the ages ... and beyond.
Nicely done, dear Yvette. Hope your Valentine's was stellar.
Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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The tender lyricism of this write is enhanced by the beautiful end rhyme of naught and thought and by the touches of alliteration.
A love poem for the ages ... and beyond.
Nicely done, dear Yvette. Hope your Valentine's was stellar.
Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Hope the same for you, Julia -- I know you can relate to this one, yeah?!! ;) The sense of truly knowing someone beyond words is something that can only be experienced...but what a fulfilling and comfortable experience it is!! :) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
How simple. And, yet, in that simplicity is all the complication and intensity of the emotions of love and devotion. A wonderfully written poem that manages to capture the human heart so well.
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How simple. And, yet, in that simplicity is all the complication and intensity of the emotions of love and devotion. A wonderfully written poem that manages to capture the human heart so well.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments! ;) The sense of truly knowing someone beyond words is something that can only be experienced...but what a fulfilling and comfortable experience it is!! :) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ricky1024
"My Being Knows You.
Is a Valentine's Poem Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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"My Being Knows You.
Is a Valentine's Poem Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Ricky! ;) The sense of truly knowing someone beyond words is something that can only be experienced...but what a fulfilling and comfortable experience it is!! :) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
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Me too dear!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Great little verse that incorporates repetition of 'through' and some end rhyme (whispers/endures, naught/thought). Sweet little Valentine verse that is destined to make someone happy or brighten their day. Nice entry. Fascinating art choice, suggested more than shown.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Great little verse that incorporates repetition of 'through' and some end rhyme (whispers/endures, naught/thought). Sweet little Valentine verse that is destined to make someone happy or brighten their day. Nice entry. Fascinating art choice, suggested more than shown.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Crystie! ;) The sense of truly knowing someone beyond words is something that can only be experienced...but what a fulfilling and comfortable experience it is!! :) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
This is a reality denied to many and such a lovely positive romance poem to give hope to those still seeking that special someone.
The image is delightful and seems to proffer a sense of reality amidst
a fantasy setting.
A fine Valentines Day offering.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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This is a reality denied to many and such a lovely positive romance poem to give hope to those still seeking that special someone.
The image is delightful and seems to proffer a sense of reality amidst
a fantasy setting.
A fine Valentines Day offering.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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You are so right about that, Shirley... :) :) The sense of truly knowing someone beyond words is something that can only be experienced...but what a fulfilling and comfortable experience it is!! :) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
