life undeterred
a rap song11 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is delightful. When I read poetry I like the words to make sense as your does but I especially like the beat and a flow. By even rhyming with the lines themselves you make the poem more fun than ever to read.
Great job.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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This is delightful. When I read poetry I like the words to make sense as your does but I especially like the beat and a flow. By even rhyming with the lines themselves you make the poem more fun than ever to read.
Great job.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thanks for the encouraging review and sparkly stars Beth. I agree with you that clarity is key to keep my attention when reading poetry. Or at least enlighten us in the author's notes. Cheers, mic drop.
