Comment from Kaneh Bosem

Excellent

Nice poem! I am very fond of flowers myself, living in Hawaii. I love the way that you introduce the flower into the mist. This is such a beautiful Haiku!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

I see this poem represents the scents that we can get from a flower. I love the thought of the mist that comes from spraying perfume on yourself being tiny little flowers.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 flower poem about the fragrant perfume spray of the delicate roses that carries the scent in the mist.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

Comment from Dancemom

Excellent

This is a well-written poem for the flower 575 contest. Your words are making me smell the beautiful rose, one of the few flowers that I'm not allergic too. Great use of alliteration.

Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020

Thanks for reviewing! Much appreciated.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Perfume's Scented Spray"
Is a 5-7-5 flower writing prompt I.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020

Thanks for reviewing! Much appreciated.

Comment from Eve Vasa

Excellent

Hi, a very pretty and expressive poem for so few words. I do like your publishing choices, the picture, font, etc.

I noticed no errors, and scent if a very strong sense. It can cause us to remember very vividly. I liked that you make that connection in the poem. Cheers, Eve.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020

Thanks for reviewing! Much appreciated.

Comment from playinaround

Excellent

lovely and feminine. I really enjoyed feeling so feminine as I read. eloquent and beautiful. the only line that could be improved upon is the first. Parfumes scented spray. This line seems to be a little clumsy compared to the rest.. my impressions. thank you for sharing the beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020

Thanks for reviewing! Much appreciated.
Your comment made me have another think about line one, but there's not much wiggle room with 5 syllables and a rhyme, so I couldn't come up with any improvement.

reply by playinaround on 13-Feb-2020

Great poem!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A perfumed rose in the mist can certainly evoke our senses with its petals of loving bliss and we feel kissed by their magic, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020

Thanks, Dolly.