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The Gardens at Weatherbury

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Comment from susand3022
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Imps! Oh, My LLOTS, Hahahahaha!!! I'm sitting here cracking up over your completely fanciful imagination, which I love beyond all measure! You have no idea. There is no end to your surprises. This is going to be such a fun book... I can see it already. I swear, if you leave me hanging this time, I'll come down there and smack you around... northern girl style! (which means with a bottle of wine and a couple of glasses!... well maybe a couple of bottles... lol) Love you, BLOTS! May you warm up down there! :)

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    LOL!!! ;) :) Always full of sunshine, yeah, BLOTN?!! :) :) Thanx so much for keeping up with Nicholas and company -- your support is awesome to me!! ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
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Is this... Which chapter? I have read all your stories and the imps is cute. How many? Going to keep me dangling like a fish caught on your line, Yvette? :) Keep writing and I'll keep reading until I'm blind. Thank you for sharing. :) ;)

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Chapter 6 this time! ;) :) I apologize for being so far behind!! Was a crazy week and I have all the boys home this weekend (HOORAY!!).... I'm attempting to get caught up while they're outside working on cars!! Don't know how far I'll get, but we'll see!! ;) :) Take care! Yvette
Comment from L. R. Jensen
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What a fun mixture of fantasy and humor. Constantine and Archie cracked me up. Having not read the previous chapters, I thought they would be little kids. When I got to the character descriptions at the end, of course it made perfect sense.:) Your descriptions are great- I could see it all in my head. I look forward to the new discoveries Nicholas will make!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed the imps... I plan on using them on and off cuz they were so fun!! ;) And am glad to have you on board... be sure to pop back if you have a chance and catch up on their history! ;) I'm purposefully keeping each chapter to about 500 words on purpose, but it is so-o-o tempting to go longer!! ;) :) But, I shall persevere (wink, wink!) and I'm so happy you'll be along for the adventure! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from papa55mike
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What a beautifully written chapter with great descriptions. You have to watch out for those imps they pack a sting. I wish I had a six for you. Best of luck with the rest of the book!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed the imps... I plan on using them on and off cuz they were so fun!! ;) Thanx, Mike, and have a great week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
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A very nice continuation chapter Yvette. It held a great deal of suspense in regards to the glow and wondering what was causing it. Then an equal sense of suspense when the discovery was made-imps. Rather enjoyable.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed the imps... I plan on using them on and off cuz they were so fun!! ;) And thanx much, ma'am, for keeping up with Nicholas and company ... I'm purposefully keeping each one to about 500 words on purpose, but it is so-o-o tempting to go longer!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
reply by aryr on 17-Feb-2020
    You are so welcome Yvette, no don't succumb to temptation, lol.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Yvette. I had gotten to the place where I was beginning to understand this story the last couple of chapters. I'll figure this one out if I read it a few more times. You might need to make things easier so I can understand them. :))).

Don't make it too easy for me though. :)))

Z. (*_*)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    LOL!! ;) :) Just keep hanging in there... I know you can do it! :) Yvette
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I'm happy to read the next chapter in your story, YM. This one had super flow and great descriptive words with much action. I like the line about looking' like a little red chili pepper about to explode.' I found it interesting about the light show, too. I look forward to your next chapter. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed the imps... I plan on using them on and off cuz they were so fun!! ;) And thanx for keeping up with Nicholas and company ... Purposefully keeping each one to about 500 words on purpose, but it is so-o-o tempting to go longer!! ;) :)
    I apologize for being so far behind!! Was a crazy week and I have all the boys home this weekend (HOORAY!!).... I'm attempting to get caught up while they're outside working on cars!! Don't know how far I'll get, but we'll see!! ;) :) Take care! Yvette
Comment from Lu Saluna
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This book gets more entertaining by the chapter. You do a good job of leaving the reader hanging just enough that they want to read more.
Great story.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Hooray!! ;) You're all caught up - look for the next chapter in a few weeks! ;) Be sure to stop by any time for a perusal through the portfolio... :) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from juliaSjames
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I love the way you show the size of the imp by having it smacked with a blueberry. Drone like imps are a great way of blending the old with the new. Kids will enjoy this.

So pleased this fantasy tale is continuing, Yvette. You must be having all kinds of fun writing it.

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed the imps... I plan on using them on and off cuz they were so fun!! ;) And thanx for keeping up with Nicholas and company ... Purposefully keeping each one to about 500 words on purpose, but it is so-o-o tempting to go longer!! ;) :)
    I apologize for being so far behind!! Was a crazy week and I have all the boys home this weekend (HOORAY!!).... I'm attempting to get caught up while they're outside working on cars with their dad!! Don't know how far I'll get, but we'll see!! ;) :) Take care! Yvette
reply by juliaSjames on 16-Feb-2020
    :-))
Comment from Rikki66
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Imps, the Fae and Faries Mystical creatures inhabit the garden. I'm sure they help to bring beauty to the flora. This is a very good piece I have been reading and am looking forward to the next chapter.
Rikki

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    LOL! So glad you enjoyed the imps, Rikki... I plan on using them on and off cuz they were so fun!! ;) And thanx for keeping up with Nicholas and company ... Purposefully keeping each one to about 500 words on purpose, but it is so-o-o tempting to go longer!! ;) :)
    I apologize for being so far behind!! Was a crazy week and I have all the boys home this weekend (HOORAY!!).... I'm attempting to get caught up while they're outside working on cars with their dad!! Don't know how far I'll get, but we'll see!! ;) :) Take care! Yvette

reply by Rikki66 on 17-Feb-2020
    I am far behind trying to type with one hand. Pulled a muscle in my right shoulder.
    Rikki