Comment from gingermo

Excellent

There's a clever contrast here between the first and third line and the second line.The first and third line are complimentary painting the flowers as enchanting and heavenly. The second line however changes the tone ... showy and flaunting. The picture is perfect for this poem.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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Comment from Eve Vasa

Excellent

Hi Anon, a pretty poem for the competition. Classic word choices for your imagery, and the publishing enhanced your poem. I saw no errors and have no ideas on how to improve your poem, and best of luck. Cheers, Eve.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

What a stunning rose arbour in your chosen image. As you say in the poem, a heavenly display. Plenty of enchantment, too. I enjoyed reading this well-presented entry.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, yes a beautiful garden is a sight for the eyes, your words enhance this great photo excellently, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020

Thank you kindly, you review, comments and best wishes are appreciated.