Roses Choc'late Wine
A valentine poem: 20 syllables25 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This shows that love is a two way endeavor and it also brings
up the standard gifts for Valentine' Day,
Congrats on placing in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
This shows that love is a two way endeavor and it also brings
up the standard gifts for Valentine' Day,
Congrats on placing in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Hi Drogon poet, Thanks you and yes chocs are always a nice surprise i will keep writing Cheers Chris
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Hi Chris,
My pleasure. Have a great week.
Joan
Comment from BeasPeas
Ooooh, good job. Treat each other right on Valentine's day and it insures a reward later. This is sweet and illustrated well. An enjoyable read and best of luck in the contest if it's not over. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
Ooooh, good job. Treat each other right on Valentine's day and it insures a reward later. This is sweet and illustrated well. An enjoyable read and best of luck in the contest if it's not over. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Hi Marilyn Thanks heaps and yes an honorable mention so thats not too bad LOL Cheers Chris
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Congratulations! Marilyn
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent good use of rhyme with an emphatic message with much appreciated and endearing tradition and quality it speaks of the true desire of gratifying ones lover.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
Excellent good use of rhyme with an emphatic message with much appreciated and endearing tradition and quality it speaks of the true desire of gratifying ones lover.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Hi Bicpen, Thanks for yoir review for my 20 syllable Valentine poem Much appreciated Cheers Christine
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Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Bravo! These words say it all and then some. With the art, you present a loving picture of what Valentine's day is all about. The love that moves the world will never die.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
Bravo! These words say it all and then some. With the art, you present a loving picture of what Valentine's day is all about. The love that moves the world will never die.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Hi Raffaelina, Thanks for reading my Valentine poem and hes we need more love though Still chocolates and wine helps LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Therese Caron
I love this poem! It is sweet and simple, and says it all. Clear and concise, completely uncluttered. The image you chose complements your writing perfectly. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
I love this poem! It is sweet and simple, and says it all. Clear and concise, completely uncluttered. The image you chose complements your writing perfectly. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thanks Therese, for your great review, Yes uncluttered, that's me LOL We shall see Many Cheers for your good luck Chris
Comment from Susan Larson
Roses, chocolate and wine will do it anytime, especially for Valentine's Day. I love your picture. It really caught my eye. Wishing you well in the contest. May you celebrate with roses, chocolate and wine!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
Roses, chocolate and wine will do it anytime, especially for Valentine's Day. I love your picture. It really caught my eye. Wishing you well in the contest. May you celebrate with roses, chocolate and wine!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Hi Susan Thanks very much and yes all three or four will do LOL Yes I loved this image too it seemed to say what I meant my poem to convey ha ha Cheers Chris
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Chrissy710, a tgiFriday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. The flow and rhymes were good and your syllable count was spot on. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
Hello Chrissy710, a tgiFriday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. The flow and rhymes were good and your syllable count was spot on. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Hi 13th poet, Thanks for your review, and to you too Happy Valentine's day, and yes to all of the above. Glad to share with you, Cheers Christine
Comment from pharp
Chris,
This is just sooooooo sweet and romantic.
Roses, chocolate and wine a great combination
not to forget ,the kisses and hug, oh what a night.
Excellent job in the penning of this poem my dear,
the very best to you in the contest.
Hugs....Portia
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
Chris,
This is just sooooooo sweet and romantic.
Roses, chocolate and wine a great combination
not to forget ,the kisses and hug, oh what a night.
Excellent job in the penning of this poem my dear,
the very best to you in the contest.
Hugs....Portia
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Hi Portia, Thanks so much Oh what a night LOL Had fun with this one we shall see Cheers Chris
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lovely, concise poem says so much in so few words--and just twenty syllables. It is simple--meant as a compliment!--and sweet. Pretty artwork; she looks like Snow White.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
Your lovely, concise poem says so much in so few words--and just twenty syllables. It is simple--meant as a compliment!--and sweet. Pretty artwork; she looks like Snow White.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Hi Janice, Thanks so much I enjoyed the challenger of getting just the right message in 20 syllables Yes the image is great and she portrayed my hidden meaning LOL Cheers Chris
Comment from Bill Schott
This Valentine poem, Roses Choc'late Wine, presented in four, five syllable lines adds kisses and hugs to create a most desirable message for the cupiditated target.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
This Valentine poem, Roses Choc'late Wine, presented in four, five syllable lines adds kisses and hugs to create a most desirable message for the cupiditated target.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Hi Bill, Thanks for your review and cant reveal too much LOL Cheers Chris