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Roses Choc'late Wine

A valentine poem: 20 syllables

25 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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This shows that love is a two way endeavor and it also brings
up the standard gifts for Valentine' Day,
Congrats on placing in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
    Hi Drogon poet, Thanks you and yes chocs are always a nice surprise i will keep writing Cheers Chris
reply by dragonpoet on 02-Mar-2020
    Hi Chris,
    My pleasure. Have a great week.
    Joan
Comment from BeasPeas
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Ooooh, good job. Treat each other right on Valentine's day and it insures a reward later. This is sweet and illustrated well. An enjoyable read and best of luck in the contest if it's not over. Marilyn

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
    Hi Marilyn Thanks heaps and yes an honorable mention so thats not too bad LOL Cheers Chris
reply by BeasPeas on 23-Feb-2020
    Congratulations! Marilyn
Comment from Bicpen
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Excellent good use of rhyme with an emphatic message with much appreciated and endearing tradition and quality it speaks of the true desire of gratifying ones lover.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Hi Bicpen, Thanks for yoir review for my 20 syllable Valentine poem Much appreciated Cheers Christine
reply by Bicpen on 16-Feb-2020
    anytime ...
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Bravo! These words say it all and then some. With the art, you present a loving picture of what Valentine's day is all about. The love that moves the world will never die.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Hi Raffaelina, Thanks for reading my Valentine poem and hes we need more love though Still chocolates and wine helps LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Therese Caron
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I love this poem! It is sweet and simple, and says it all. Clear and concise, completely uncluttered. The image you chose complements your writing perfectly. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thanks Therese, for your great review, Yes uncluttered, that's me LOL We shall see Many Cheers for your good luck Chris
Comment from Susan Larson
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Roses, chocolate and wine will do it anytime, especially for Valentine's Day. I love your picture. It really caught my eye. Wishing you well in the contest. May you celebrate with roses, chocolate and wine!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Hi Susan Thanks very much and yes all three or four will do LOL Yes I loved this image too it seemed to say what I meant my poem to convey ha ha Cheers Chris
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Chrissy710, a tgiFriday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. The flow and rhymes were good and your syllable count was spot on. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Hi 13th poet, Thanks for your review, and to you too Happy Valentine's day, and yes to all of the above. Glad to share with you, Cheers Christine
Comment from pharp
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Chris,

This is just sooooooo sweet and romantic.
Roses, chocolate and wine a great combination
not to forget ,the kisses and hug, oh what a night.
Excellent job in the penning of this poem my dear,
the very best to you in the contest.

Hugs....Portia

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Hi Portia, Thanks so much Oh what a night LOL Had fun with this one we shall see Cheers Chris
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your lovely, concise poem says so much in so few words--and just twenty syllables. It is simple--meant as a compliment!--and sweet. Pretty artwork; she looks like Snow White.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Hi Janice, Thanks so much I enjoyed the challenger of getting just the right message in 20 syllables Yes the image is great and she portrayed my hidden meaning LOL Cheers Chris
Comment from Bill Schott
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This Valentine poem, Roses Choc'late Wine, presented in four, five syllable lines adds kisses and hugs to create a most desirable message for the cupiditated target.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Hi Bill, Thanks for your review and cant reveal too much LOL Cheers Chris