Splash of color
Flower 5/7/53 total reviews
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
This is a good 5-7-5 flower poem. The count is perfect, and I like the mention of winter winds, to place the poem in actuality.
Pansies are lovely, one of my favorites.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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This is a good 5-7-5 flower poem. The count is perfect, and I like the mention of winter winds, to place the poem in actuality.
Pansies are lovely, one of my favorites.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thanks for reading and those encouraging comments zanya
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hello, this is a pretty work that has been nicely published. I like your choice of art and notice this is for the prompt, so best of luck with this poem. I have no suggestions for improvement and would recommend this poem to others for review, cheers, Eve.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Hello, this is a pretty work that has been nicely published. I like your choice of art and notice this is for the prompt, so best of luck with this poem. I have no suggestions for improvement and would recommend this poem to others for review, cheers, Eve.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from RodG
Where do you live? I won't see pansies until late April. I love their bright faces and love to see them "dance colorfully." Your short poem gives us a vivid snapshot. Rod
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Where do you live? I won't see pansies until late April. I love their bright faces and love to see them "dance colorfully." Your short poem gives us a vivid snapshot. Rod
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thanks for a great review - wishful thinking -hoping Spring will show up soon!!zanya