haiku (revival)
winter haiku in 5-7-518 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start, as sad as it seem it's season is over yet smile because it shall return and so will the flowers.
cookie
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start, as sad as it seem it's season is over yet smile because it shall return and so will the flowers.
cookie
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Miss Cookie, that is a surprise, and a very welcome one too. Thanks for the five stars.
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it was my pleasure. cookie
Comment from Gail Denham
Nice haiku - makes me think of the brave crocus that poke up through the snow - and yesterday while out walking, I saw two small green-leaved bunches - what will they be - the ground here is still frozen. Survival.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Nice haiku - makes me think of the brave crocus that poke up through the snow - and yesterday while out walking, I saw two small green-leaved bunches - what will they be - the ground here is still frozen. Survival.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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The crocus and the snowdrop belong to the same family. They are strong and survivors by birth. Thanks, Gail!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These flowers never fail to astound me with their hardy souls as they battle the elements to seek the sun and bloom, I enjoyed your words here Marjon, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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These flowers never fail to astound me with their hardy souls as they battle the elements to seek the sun and bloom, I enjoyed your words here Marjon, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Dolly!
Comment from Minglement
This well describes the valiant snowdrop, which I love! It's a lovely entry or the Haiku on a flower. Beautiful descriptive words and phrases. I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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This well describes the valiant snowdrop, which I love! It's a lovely entry or the Haiku on a flower. Beautiful descriptive words and phrases. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Minglement, A very big "Thank you" for your review.
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
I thought this was a Very good haiku reflecting the coming of spring flowers and blooms.
Very well written and very good thoughts brought together.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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I thought this was a Very good haiku reflecting the coming of spring flowers and blooms.
Very well written and very good thoughts brought together.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Lil'Mormon, I am very happy with your review from my haiku. Thank you very much.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like your haiku. I am always struck by that single flower or tree that manages to thrive in the worst conditions. You capture that feeling of awe for me. Then I read your comment about insisting against all odds. That takes your haiku to a higher, personal level for me. I was impressed.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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I like your haiku. I am always struck by that single flower or tree that manages to thrive in the worst conditions. You capture that feeling of awe for me. Then I read your comment about insisting against all odds. That takes your haiku to a higher, personal level for me. I was impressed.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Debbie, thank you very much. The snowdrop is one of my absolute favored flowers. The little thing is so courageous!
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I've never seen one. It is gorgeous.
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Come and visit me Lol. There are quite a few here.
Comment from moongirlwriter
I do so love this beautifully illustrated Haiku. So well written and the image is just plain lovely and matches perfectly. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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I do so love this beautifully illustrated Haiku. So well written and the image is just plain lovely and matches perfectly. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Moongirl, thanks. Yes, I was glad I found the picture to the haiku.
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Ricky1024 you are welcome. I hope for you she rectifies.
Comment from Mia Twysted
Flowers survive through the cold and the snow. This is one that doesn't need to be reseeded as it will last due to its strong and vibrate nature.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Flowers survive through the cold and the snow. This is one that doesn't need to be reseeded as it will last due to its strong and vibrate nature.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thanks, Mia! True, snowdrops are the resistent species.
Comment from Alchera
Beautifully penned, selected within its flowered beauty, set in its required counted structural 5/7/5 haiku format and above all throughout its perfect descriptive narration storylined content. Great haiku. I really like it!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Beautifully penned, selected within its flowered beauty, set in its required counted structural 5/7/5 haiku format and above all throughout its perfect descriptive narration storylined content. Great haiku. I really like it!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Alchera, your comment makes me really happy. Thank you so much!
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Youn are welcomed and may you win the contest!Blessings Tony
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Thank you again!
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with pleasure.
Comment from juliaSjames
I love to see a clump of snowdrops on a wintry day. These little flowers are beautiful and amazing. Nice personification of the flower bold enough to check out the weather first.
Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I love to see a clump of snowdrops on a wintry day. These little flowers are beautiful and amazing. Nice personification of the flower bold enough to check out the weather first.
Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Julia, thanks for your nice review!