I Am Whatever
I Am Poem Contest Entry22 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
Wow - This is one of the more interesting entries for the contest, lol. You fulfilled the contest rules and gave us all a chuckle. I have to look up mendacious, but that's good. I love earning something new. I enjoy your writing. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Wow - This is one of the more interesting entries for the contest, lol. You fulfilled the contest rules and gave us all a chuckle. I have to look up mendacious, but that's good. I love earning something new. I enjoy your writing. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the gracious stars, Minglement. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. have a great night.
Ron
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You are most welcome, Ron :)
Comment from gingermo
A clever poem indeed. Sarcastic, a cynic to the enth degree and a liar too (I have to admit to looking up mendacious) a thoroughly unlikable person.
Obnoxious lines follow one another in obvious disdain for everyone even yourself... 'I try and try and try and get nowhere at breakneck speed,' 'I feel imaginary love for my fellow Fanstorians', 'I worry if Tom keeps me here for my poetry or my money?' Ouch! I get your twisted sense of humor and enjoyed it and hope you get more than two votes in the competition.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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A clever poem indeed. Sarcastic, a cynic to the enth degree and a liar too (I have to admit to looking up mendacious) a thoroughly unlikable person.
Obnoxious lines follow one another in obvious disdain for everyone even yourself... 'I try and try and try and get nowhere at breakneck speed,' 'I feel imaginary love for my fellow Fanstorians', 'I worry if Tom keeps me here for my poetry or my money?' Ouch! I get your twisted sense of humor and enjoyed it and hope you get more than two votes in the competition.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Gingermo. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a wonderful night.
Ron
Comment from w.j.debi
An interesting list in your verse. I love your sarcasm. The refrain line is especially fun since it calls into question whether you are joking or not. It's sort of a truth or dare attitude.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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An interesting list in your verse. I love your sarcasm. The refrain line is especially fun since it calls into question whether you are joking or not. It's sort of a truth or dare attitude.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Debi. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
Sarcastic? Maybe. Mendacious? Definitely not. You just tell it like you see it. Oh, maybe that's the sarcastic part??? Loved your style and your wisdom. Your shirt's pretty cool, too. Here's my vote, so you'll get at least two... ...ec
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Sarcastic? Maybe. Mendacious? Definitely not. You just tell it like you see it. Oh, maybe that's the sarcastic part??? Loved your style and your wisdom. Your shirt's pretty cool, too. Here's my vote, so you'll get at least two... ...ec
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review, Elaine. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and support. Yeah, I just like to ruffle some feathers on here once in a while. Lol. Have yourself a wonderful night.
Ron
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you're welcome... ...ec
Comment from susand3022
You are sarcastic and mendacious (which I had to ask Google about by the way) and I'm pretty sure I friended you last year sometime but why don't you come through on my messages? I think you're hysterical and I love your sense of humor... 1 review under your belt for this one! ;)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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You are sarcastic and mendacious (which I had to ask Google about by the way) and I'm pretty sure I friended you last year sometime but why don't you come through on my messages? I think you're hysterical and I love your sense of humor... 1 review under your belt for this one! ;)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Hey, Susan, hello. Thank you so much for the fantastic review. I really appreciate that you like my silliness and I'm glad to see you jumped on as a fan. I'm sure you'll see more dumb stuff from me here and there. Lol. Thank you again for the review. I hope you have a great night.
Ron
Comment from robyn corum
DS,
Well, then that's very sad. That would mean there are only two people here who get this brand of humor. I love it. *smile* Love, love, love it.
I was raised on silly, dry wit, so this is right up my alley. Tongue-in-cheek, say what you think (mostly, but carefully?), try(?) to be politically correct in a way but HATE IT! stuff.
I thought this was a wonderfully refreshing change from a lot of posts and I have to imagine you'll get more than two reviews. It's a fun post and shows a great deal of imagination and humor. Thanks so much for playing - and for making me smile. Hugs -- and good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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DS,
Well, then that's very sad. That would mean there are only two people here who get this brand of humor. I love it. *smile* Love, love, love it.
I was raised on silly, dry wit, so this is right up my alley. Tongue-in-cheek, say what you think (mostly, but carefully?), try(?) to be politically correct in a way but HATE IT! stuff.
I thought this was a wonderfully refreshing change from a lot of posts and I have to imagine you'll get more than two reviews. It's a fun post and shows a great deal of imagination and humor. Thanks so much for playing - and for making me smile. Hugs -- and good luck!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Lol. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and for throwing the contest, Robyn. I had a blast with it. Yeah, I figured most of the entries were going to be exactly as expected and I wasn't wrong. Haha. I like to ruffle some feathers on here once in a while. It seems my serious stuff hardly ever flies and I have a lot more fun going down this road. Lol. I'm glad you liked my little offering, Robyn. Thank you again. Have a wonderful night and catch you on the next go round.
Ron
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Well said sir. You've presented your genuine, unpretentious, raw and unrefined self to us beautifully. Well played! I can relate to but may not always agree with straight forward, this is who I am people. They usually have one face for everywhere and everything. It's better that way so you don't have to figure out the different faces some people present. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Well said sir. You've presented your genuine, unpretentious, raw and unrefined self to us beautifully. Well played! I can relate to but may not always agree with straight forward, this is who I am people. They usually have one face for everywhere and everything. It's better that way so you don't have to figure out the different faces some people present. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Hey, Jeffrey, hi. Thank you for the fantastic review, friend. Yeah, a lot of people have those hidden faces we only see once in a while. I really appreciate the generous stars, Jeff. I'm glad you liked my little contest entry. Have yourself a great night and thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Martie Zuckerman
I get it! I think it's fabulous. It makes me think you might be a bit sarcastic and perhaps....mendacious! Very well done, good rhythm and great responses. Very enjoyable. I also am a bit sarcastic and yes, mendacious! LOL
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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I get it! I think it's fabulous. It makes me think you might be a bit sarcastic and perhaps....mendacious! Very well done, good rhythm and great responses. Very enjoyable. I also am a bit sarcastic and yes, mendacious! LOL
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Haha. I think we all have a little bit in us. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Martie. Sometimes you just have to tell it like it is. Lol. I dearly appreciate the kind rating, M. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again. I hope you have a great night.
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Ron
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Hahaha, this is hilarious!! And I am absolutely sure that you are going to get waaayyy more than 2 reviews for this one! I loved every line of it and all the puns you wrote! I am going to be reading this one again and again!
Great humour and I loved this rant/commentary style of writing!
Best wishes for the contest! Have a good day :-)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Hahaha, this is hilarious!! And I am absolutely sure that you are going to get waaayyy more than 2 reviews for this one! I loved every line of it and all the puns you wrote! I am going to be reading this one again and again!
Great humour and I loved this rant/commentary style of writing!
Best wishes for the contest! Have a good day :-)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Hey, Aaqib, hello. Thank you for the fantastic review and the huge sixer, friend. Glad to see you jumped on as a fan as well. I'm always writing silliness. That's how I get my kicks on here. I step on the serious side sometimes but not too often. Lol. Thank you again for the giant six, Aaqib. Have a great night.
Ron
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You earned it! Even though you are my competition right now in the I AM contest, I was completely blown away by your work! It was great in every sense and I loved the humour!
Best wishes :-)
Comment from LisaMay
I really liked this silly piece and i intend to have a great night. Keep saying what you dang well please and thank you for the 10 points and 52 cents. I too am capable of being sarcastic and mendacious. Isn't it fun? It flies right over some people's heads.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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I really liked this silly piece and i intend to have a great night. Keep saying what you dang well please and thank you for the 10 points and 52 cents. I too am capable of being sarcastic and mendacious. Isn't it fun? It flies right over some people's heads.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Lol. It sure does. Hey, Lisa, hello. Thank you so much for the hilarious review and gracious stars. Sometimes you just have to tell it like it is. Haha. I really appreciate the review, L. Thank you again. Have a great night or day, whatever it is there when you read this.
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Ron
