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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on the prize--surely well deserved. Bares and shares--bonus rhyme. Clever moniker: Bucketlist! Hope you accomplish all items thereon. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
Congrats on the prize--surely well deserved. Bares and shares--bonus rhyme. Clever moniker: Bucketlist! Hope you accomplish all items thereon. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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I thank you so much for the complimentary review
Hugs Trisha
Comment from dragonpoet
THese five lines uses internal and slant rhymes to encompass all kinds of poetic forms and the effect poetry has on us.
Congrats on placing second in the contest
Keep writing
dp
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
THese five lines uses internal and slant rhymes to encompass all kinds of poetic forms and the effect poetry has on us.
Congrats on placing second in the contest
Keep writing
dp
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha
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You're welcome.
Have a great week, Trisha.
Joan
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You as well!
Comment from amada
I just read your winning poem about poetry. Wonderful, I couldn't have said better. Congratulations and I hope to write like you do, someday. Your work is great, such an inspiration.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
I just read your winning poem about poetry. Wonderful, I couldn't have said better. Congratulations and I hope to write like you do, someday. Your work is great, such an inspiration.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you for a fantastic review. Going by your poetry ratings, you have no reason to want to write as I do. Your penning is far superior to mine, and I am honored by your opinion.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
Trish, This is a very worded and well written 5 Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings Teri
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
Trish, This is a very worded and well written 5 Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings Teri
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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As always Teri, thanks and blessings for your kind review .
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
silent
or voiced
in all forms and modes
poetry both bares and shares
our spirit and soul
Oh my dear lady, you have captured in words what I have been trying to voice. Excellent
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
silent
or voiced
in all forms and modes
poetry both bares and shares
our spirit and soul
Oh my dear lady, you have captured in words what I have been trying to voice. Excellent
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I am happy that you find my poem worthy of 6 stars. I am honored and I thank you,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written five-line poem about being able to voice our thoughts in all kinds of modes and forms through poetry that bare our souls to the reader who can see within.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
A very well-written five-line poem about being able to voice our thoughts in all kinds of modes and forms through poetry that bare our souls to the reader who can see within.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Hi Sandra, sorry for the break in reviewing your poetry. Thanks very much for your loyalty in reviewing
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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What a fabulous five line poem contest entry! I love it. The presentation is beautiful. The rhyming is very good too.
Good luck.
Gypsy ð???
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
Hello my friend ð???
What a fabulous five line poem contest entry! I love it. The presentation is beautiful. The rhyming is very good too.
Good luck.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thanks, Gypsy! Your name suggests a free spirit, great for poetry!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Bucketlist, a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you utilized the 5 lines well. I love the message and agree with you completely. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
Hello Bucketlist, a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you utilized the 5 lines well. I love the message and agree with you completely. Have a great day!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review. Soulful writing and have a great day too
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from May 1
That is so wonderfully said and so true. I guess that's why I've avoided writing poetry for so long because I found it scary to reveal your very soul. All in all, I love this poem and I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
That is so wonderfully said and so true. I guess that's why I've avoided writing poetry for so long because I found it scary to reveal your very soul. All in all, I love this poem and I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Please experiment, you?ll be surprised how poetry will bloom, just like you.
Thanks for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this short poem that expresses well your idea of speaking from our hearts in a creative way thru poetry. I like the unique picture that you chose to go with it. Good luck in the contest. Bill
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
I like this short poem that expresses well your idea of speaking from our hearts in a creative way thru poetry. I like the unique picture that you chose to go with it. Good luck in the contest. Bill
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thanks Bill, I appreciate your great review
Hugs, Trisha