Oh Life!
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Comment from Hitcher
A compulsive liar... I have known a couple of them during my lifetime, cant say I'm friends with any of them now though, too hard! Your little offering touches on a subject we can ALL relate to in some way. Nice!
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A compulsive liar... I have known a couple of them during my lifetime, cant say I'm friends with any of them now though, too hard! Your little offering touches on a subject we can ALL relate to in some way. Nice!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO ALCREATOR: I like your posting here, because it expresses so many truths. It reminds me of the saying: "Ain't it funny how you feel shows on your face? No matter how hard you try to hide it, it shows its trace," Then there's the saying: "Liar, liar, pants on fire."
If the shame-faced person looks down at his pants to, "CHECK." ???? "You don't have to tell the cat, that Mickey's a mouse." How about this saying? "Lies tell the truth on lies." The devil told the lie, that we don't have to die, if we disobey God, so we gave disobedience a try. But the cemetery told the truth, by and by. How about this saying? "The truth will set you free.
And he who the Son sets free, is free indeed." Our Lord, Jesus said this saying: "I am the way, the, TRUTH, and the life." And I know that's the truth. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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HELLO ALCREATOR: I like your posting here, because it expresses so many truths. It reminds me of the saying: "Ain't it funny how you feel shows on your face? No matter how hard you try to hide it, it shows its trace," Then there's the saying: "Liar, liar, pants on fire."
If the shame-faced person looks down at his pants to, "CHECK." ???? "You don't have to tell the cat, that Mickey's a mouse." How about this saying? "Lies tell the truth on lies." The devil told the lie, that we don't have to die, if we disobey God, so we gave disobedience a try. But the cemetery told the truth, by and by. How about this saying? "The truth will set you free.
And he who the Son sets free, is free indeed." Our Lord, Jesus said this saying: "I am the way, the, TRUTH, and the life." And I know that's the truth. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I do have some difficulty reading this. It seems disjointed and not clear what it is you want to say. Are you endorsing lying or are you in favour of telling the truth? I'm confused. All the best. Ulla:))
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Hi there, I do have some difficulty reading this. It seems disjointed and not clear what it is you want to say. Are you endorsing lying or are you in favour of telling the truth? I'm confused. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
Comment from livelylinda
Interesting concept written in a slightly bizarre manner. Or, I could call it unique in style and word. I don't agree with you on lying, though. There is beauty in truth. It offers freedom, fluidity, raises one above the sordid crowd of liars. But, just an old woman's opinion . . . livelylinda
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Interesting concept written in a slightly bizarre manner. Or, I could call it unique in style and word. I don't agree with you on lying, though. There is beauty in truth. It offers freedom, fluidity, raises one above the sordid crowd of liars. But, just an old woman's opinion . . . livelylinda
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
It's a nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, and depicting its theme in an interesting way as well as giving the reader/reviewer an opportunity for a healthy mental exercise.
Smooth, spontaneous, and enchanting flow having impressive phraseology.
Worth Enjoying!
[...So I lie! What a joy drive! ]
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
It's a nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, and depicting its theme in an interesting way as well as giving the reader/reviewer an opportunity for a healthy mental exercise.
Smooth, spontaneous, and enchanting flow having impressive phraseology.
Worth Enjoying!
[...So I lie! What a joy drive! ]
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this complete professional review I do appreciate.
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A. Litt Dear, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from tfawcus
I enjoyed your acrostic poem about truth-telling and lying. There seems to be a great deal of lying going on in public life these days. The truth can only be twisted so far before it ceases to be the truth.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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I enjoyed your acrostic poem about truth-telling and lying. There seems to be a great deal of lying going on in public life these days. The truth can only be twisted so far before it ceases to be the truth.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review I appreciate.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Some weave a web of lies and then can't remember what hey have said, my dad always said you need a good memory if you are going to lie and my memory is terrible, so the truth is easier! Wise words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Some weave a web of lies and then can't remember what hey have said, my dad always said you need a good memory if you are going to lie and my memory is terrible, so the truth is easier! Wise words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this personalized review I appreciate.
Comment from Aussie
"Know the truth and the truth will set you free," Bible.
I liked your opening chapter (tiny as it was) when we walk in the light the truth will set us free. Darkness is all around us. He gave us the choice. Thank you, K.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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"Know the truth and the truth will set you free," Bible.
I liked your opening chapter (tiny as it was) when we walk in the light the truth will set us free. Darkness is all around us. He gave us the choice. Thank you, K.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this gracious review I appreciate.
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
I like how you turned a negative trait into a fun little poem. Is the hide the word TRUES running down like an acrostic? Some people do seem to take pleasure in lying and find a kind of thrill in not getting caught out. I guess your poem is dedicated to pathological liars haha. A very unique poem advocating FOR liars rather than against them. Nice job x
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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I like how you turned a negative trait into a fun little poem. Is the hide the word TRUES running down like an acrostic? Some people do seem to take pleasure in lying and find a kind of thrill in not getting caught out. I guess your poem is dedicated to pathological liars haha. A very unique poem advocating FOR liars rather than against them. Nice job x
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this awesome review I appreciate.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic rhyming poem in specified syllable count. It is always better to tell te truth then you don't have to remember what you have said. One suggestion - change your title also to trues.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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A very well-written acrostic rhyming poem in specified syllable count. It is always better to tell te truth then you don't have to remember what you have said. One suggestion - change your title also to trues.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review with suggestion I appreciate.
