Oh Life!
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Comment from Ceallach
I love the message sir, the reviewers challenge I failed.
Do not understand 'What a joy hide!' Unless you put a comma after joy, it makes little sense. And Now I do get the 'hide' in the style. Very good my friend. C~
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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I love the message sir, the reviewers challenge I failed.
Do not understand 'What a joy hide!' Unless you put a comma after joy, it makes little sense. And Now I do get the 'hide' in the style. Very good my friend. C~
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Half of us lies at one time or another and the other just tells stories we can't believe. I got a good laugh out of this one. Keep up the good work my friend.
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Half of us lies at one time or another and the other just tells stories we can't believe. I got a good laugh out of this one. Keep up the good work my friend.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The person who lies every time his mouth is open-and likes doing it--is much like the person who takes someone else's vehicle for a joy RIDE. He's gonna get caught! Good job--not sure I "got" it!
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The person who lies every time his mouth is open-and likes doing it--is much like the person who takes someone else's vehicle for a joy RIDE. He's gonna get caught! Good job--not sure I "got" it!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from lappmellott
Your poem is interesting. It's short but goes right to the point. Lying, absolutely is not tolerated by me. I raised my girls with that inportant lesson. I just don't understand why people feel they have to lie.
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Your poem is interesting. It's short but goes right to the point. Lying, absolutely is not tolerated by me. I raised my girls with that inportant lesson. I just don't understand why people feel they have to lie.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from godlucifer
the truth can be spoken,truth are also misery,and the truth is sometime misery is better than joy. your poem is spoken in truths and it was very mesmerize to read. i enjoyed n reading your poem. thanks for the read.
your so vein
godlucifer
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the truth can be spoken,truth are also misery,and the truth is sometime misery is better than joy. your poem is spoken in truths and it was very mesmerize to read. i enjoyed n reading your poem. thanks for the read.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from Alexander E Poet
what of are the new rules? very well written piece a good take on life your message should resonate with others message is clear shortNo typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see.Alexander Q*Q
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what of are the new rules? very well written piece a good take on life your message should resonate with others message is clear shortNo typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see.Alexander Q*Q
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from prayingpoet
I think I detect a smidgen of sarcasm in this piece, but I can appreciate that. Most of us have had times we cover things up for one reason or another; our government is famous for it.
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I think I detect a smidgen of sarcasm in this piece, but I can appreciate that. Most of us have had times we cover things up for one reason or another; our government is famous for it.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from muezza56
this is a really terrible poem! dont panic, i was lying. i enjoyed reading this 5-7-5-7-7. i dont like liars either, especially those that revel in it
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this is a really terrible poem! dont panic, i was lying. i enjoyed reading this 5-7-5-7-7. i dont like liars either, especially those that revel in it
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Then there are those that exaggerate. Does the truth free you?
I don't like to lie, so I don't. Life is so much easier that
way. We penned. Smiles. Robin :)
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Then there are those that exaggerate. Does the truth free you?
I don't like to lie, so I don't. Life is so much easier that
way. We penned. Smiles. Robin :)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from Galactia
lovely little poem reflecting those that lie and hiding the truth which could be to other's or themselves.
great job
Regards
Tia
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lovely little poem reflecting those that lie and hiding the truth which could be to other's or themselves.
great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
