The Surveillance Report
5-7-5 Lost Poetry Contest Entry6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 on something lost, The Surveillance Report, has the right set up and seems to show that we are at the end of our miserable rope.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
  |
This 5-7-5 on something lost, The Surveillance Report, has the right set up and seems to show that we are at the end of our miserable rope.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
-
Haha. I hope not. Thank you for the great review and stars, Bill. I really appreciate you stopping by. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from moongirlwriter
This poem is so true at so many levels. Humanity, environmentally and politically. . .there are so many days I truly believe we are a lost cause, then I remember I have grandchildren. . . and hop and pray it is not.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
|
This poem is so true at so many levels. Humanity, environmentally and politically. . .there are so many days I truly believe we are a lost cause, then I remember I have grandchildren. . . and hop and pray it is not.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
-
Yes, it seems like this at times, that's for sure. But I'm fairly certain we'll see it through. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, MGW. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. have a great night.
-
So this seems like a silly piece. . .okay then. I do like that. . .no looming gloom.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a well-written and humorous entry for the lost 575 contest. This cracked me up. It is funny, because it is somewhat true.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
|
This is a well-written and humorous entry for the lost 575 contest. This cracked me up. It is funny, because it is somewhat true.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
-
Thank you for the fantastic review, Dance. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great night.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Great title and terrific cartoon-like artwork accompany your 5-7-5 entry.
These aliens 'appear' pretty smart. My only question: are they posing the dilemma with Trump or our environment? IMHO, both apply.
Good luck in the voting.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
|
Great title and terrific cartoon-like artwork accompany your 5-7-5 entry.
These aliens 'appear' pretty smart. My only question: are they posing the dilemma with Trump or our environment? IMHO, both apply.
Good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
-
Trump, environment and most of humanity, seeing it from my point of view. Lol. Thank you for the excellent review and generous stars, Mark. I'm glad you liked this silly thing. Have a great day.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
|
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
-
Thank you.
Comment from LisaMay
As expected, an unexpected slant on the topic of 'lost'. I do so admire how you come at it with a fresh eye. I haven't checked out any of the other entries, but yours should score well - but as you have just categorized humans as lacking in intelligence, who knows?
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
|
As expected, an unexpected slant on the topic of 'lost'. I do so admire how you come at it with a fresh eye. I haven't checked out any of the other entries, but yours should score well - but as you have just categorized humans as lacking in intelligence, who knows?
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
-
Haha. Yeah, I doubt I'll be getting too many votes. People don't like you dumping on their intelligence, even if half of them would forget to breathe if it wasn't natural. Lol. Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa. Yep, you can spot my silliness a mile away. Have a great night.
;)
