A Mother's Heart
She'll never give up...she can't17 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 on something lost, A Mother's Heart, has the right set up and touches on the sensitive issue of loss of a child and not knowing where they are.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This 5-7-5 on something lost, A Mother's Heart, has the right set up and touches on the sensitive issue of loss of a child and not knowing where they are.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the review, Bill -- take care, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment from moongirlwriter
I cannot imagine being in your shoes. I pray that you will see your child again. So many children come up missing today, I'm not sure if the numbers have always been this high or if we are now made aware of the numbers because of the internet. It's so very sad and my heart cries for every parent who is on this journey.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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I cannot imagine being in your shoes. I pray that you will see your child again. So many children come up missing today, I'm not sure if the numbers have always been this high or if we are now made aware of the numbers because of the internet. It's so very sad and my heart cries for every parent who is on this journey.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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No biographical, although we have a family here. It is an awful reality, though, when one looks at the actual numbers. Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from BeasPeas
I watch the show, "In Pursuit," all the time and my heart goes out to those parents who have lost children due to abduction. I can't imagine such pain. The worst thing is not knowing what happened to loved ones. John Walsh is doing a great service with his work. Thank you for sharing this post. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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I watch the show, "In Pursuit," all the time and my heart goes out to those parents who have lost children due to abduction. I can't imagine such pain. The worst thing is not knowing what happened to loved ones. John Walsh is doing a great service with his work. Thank you for sharing this post. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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The disappearance of one is shocking, but the actual numbers are alarming and heartbreaking... Thank you for your review! :)
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Minglement
Wow, this one really tugs at the heartstrings. Even without the stark artwork, your words and phrases well paint a picture of fear and worry, tinged with hope as a mother, who can't lose hope. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Wow, this one really tugs at the heartstrings. Even without the stark artwork, your words and phrases well paint a picture of fear and worry, tinged with hope as a mother, who can't lose hope. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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The disappearance of one is shocking, but the actual numbers are alarming and heartbreaking... Thank you for your wonderful review!
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Agreed. Thank you for shining a light.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Absolutely heartbreaking!!! But so true. Pray the Lord takes care of the lost lambs. A very nice that you put all the information for everyone to see! Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Absolutely heartbreaking!!! But so true. Pray the Lord takes care of the lost lambs. A very nice that you put all the information for everyone to see! Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Prayers indeed, Patty... the disappearance of one is shocking, but the actual numbers are alarming and heartbreaking... Thank you for your lovely comments and for those stars, my friend... Always keep an open eye.
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I can'r imagine how it would feel to have my child taken and like poor little Adam Walsh, Devestating!
Patty
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is a wonderful poem about love and loss. Waiting for the one that was taken to be returned. It can be a lifetime of waiting and suffering, but at least you have the love you shared to remember.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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That is a wonderful poem about love and loss. Waiting for the one that was taken to be returned. It can be a lifetime of waiting and suffering, but at least you have the love you shared to remember.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your review!!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That's what great mothers do. They don't give up or give in. They do their best to keep hope alive. I love the message of this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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That's what great mothers do. They don't give up or give in. They do their best to keep hope alive. I love the message of this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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You are so right, Jeffrey! ;) The disappearance of one is shocking, but the actual numbers are alarming and heartbreaking... Thank you for your review! :)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
Your 5/7/5 poem dealing with the topic of "lost" is heartbreaking. I read another well-crafted poem today on the same topic. Your statistics are staggering. No answers. But I do know these situations occur, and I pray all missing and exploited children are found and returned... That sounds so trite, but that is my hope...
Thank you!
diane
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
Your 5/7/5 poem dealing with the topic of "lost" is heartbreaking. I read another well-crafted poem today on the same topic. Your statistics are staggering. No answers. But I do know these situations occur, and I pray all missing and exploited children are found and returned... That sounds so trite, but that is my hope...
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Not trite at all, my lady -- the disappearance of one is shocking, but the actual numbers are alarming and heartbreaking... Thank you for your review! :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about losing a child for whatever reason is the hardest thing a mother's heart must endure. She will keep hoping to meet her child once again.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about losing a child for whatever reason is the hardest thing a mother's heart must endure. She will keep hoping to meet her child once again.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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The disappearance of any child is shocking, but the numbers are alarming and heartbreaking... Thank you for your review, Sandra! :)
Comment from May 1
That is so sad and yet beautifully written. I love your approach to the topic. It's not something that would have occurred to me and yet I feel many would be able to relate to the topic. All in all, I loved reading this poem.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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That is so sad and yet beautifully written. I love your approach to the topic. It's not something that would have occurred to me and yet I feel many would be able to relate to the topic. All in all, I loved reading this poem.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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The disappearance of any one child is shocking, but the overall numbers are alarming and heartbreaking... Thank you for your review, May!
