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Shadow of Love

A 5-7-5 poem...

4 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This 5-7-5 on something lost, Shadow of Love, has the right set up and speaks to the loneliness when love has been left behind and cannot be found.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
    Sometimes it feels like your in a dungeon reach for any speck of light that might get in! appreciate your feedback and stars!! xoxo
Comment from moongirlwriter
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Wow. . .I'd say that's putting the power of love where it belongs. . .in God's love. Never have to worry about being abandoned with His love. Beautiful photo. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    So true! Only God can bring you from the pit of sorrow! Thanks for stopping to check it out! xoxo
reply by moongirlwriter on 13-Feb-2020
    :)
Comment from Ricky1024
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"Shadow of Love'
Is a 5-7-5 Loss Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis;
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Thanks and good luck with I.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    thanks Doc! always appreciate your feedback and shiny stars
Comment from Dancemom
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This is a well-written 575 for the lost poem contest. This paints a picture of someone who lost love, but it still seeking hope to move on.

Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
    So happy you can appreciate this short poem and offer feedback! Sometimes these are the hardest to critique! xoxo