Shadow of Love
A 5-7-5 poem...4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 on something lost, Shadow of Love, has the right set up and speaks to the loneliness when love has been left behind and cannot be found.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
This 5-7-5 on something lost, Shadow of Love, has the right set up and speaks to the loneliness when love has been left behind and cannot be found.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Sometimes it feels like your in a dungeon reach for any speck of light that might get in! appreciate your feedback and stars!! xoxo
Comment from moongirlwriter
Wow. . .I'd say that's putting the power of love where it belongs. . .in God's love. Never have to worry about being abandoned with His love. Beautiful photo. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
Wow. . .I'd say that's putting the power of love where it belongs. . .in God's love. Never have to worry about being abandoned with His love. Beautiful photo. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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So true! Only God can bring you from the pit of sorrow! Thanks for stopping to check it out! xoxo
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Comment from Ricky1024
"Shadow of Love'
Is a 5-7-5 Loss Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis;
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Thanks and good luck with I.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
"Shadow of Love'
Is a 5-7-5 Loss Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis;
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Thanks and good luck with I.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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thanks Doc! always appreciate your feedback and shiny stars
Comment from Dancemom
This is a well-written 575 for the lost poem contest. This paints a picture of someone who lost love, but it still seeking hope to move on.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
This is a well-written 575 for the lost poem contest. This paints a picture of someone who lost love, but it still seeking hope to move on.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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So happy you can appreciate this short poem and offer feedback! Sometimes these are the hardest to critique! xoxo