Lost Cause
5-7-5 Poetry Lost4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 on something lost, Lost Cause, has the right set up and asks us if we think we really want peace in our time or not. Doesn't seem like it.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
This 5-7-5 on something lost, Lost Cause, has the right set up and asks us if we think we really want peace in our time or not. Doesn't seem like it.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from moongirlwriter
Gosh. . .I do hope peace is not a lost cause. War has been a part of life since the beginning of time. As much as I pray for peace throughout the world, realistically. . .I do believe we will be our own demise. Nice graphic.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
Gosh. . .I do hope peace is not a lost cause. War has been a part of life since the beginning of time. As much as I pray for peace throughout the world, realistically. . .I do believe we will be our own demise. Nice graphic.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
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Comment from K Dono
I like this simplicity that makes such depth. I have to counter though. If the rumors were false the day before, could you hope for that peace another day? Thank you so much for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
I like this simplicity that makes such depth. I have to counter though. If the rumors were false the day before, could you hope for that peace another day? Thank you so much for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very thought-provoking offering for this contest that focuses on the constant 'drumbeat' of danger in the news... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
A very thought-provoking offering for this contest that focuses on the constant 'drumbeat' of danger in the news... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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And thanks for reading and reviewing zanya