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Lost Cause

5-7-5 Poetry Lost

4 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5 on something lost, Lost Cause, has the right set up and asks us if we think we really want peace in our time or not. Doesn't seem like it.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from moongirlwriter
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Gosh. . .I do hope peace is not a lost cause. War has been a part of life since the beginning of time. As much as I pray for peace throughout the world, realistically. . .I do believe we will be our own demise. Nice graphic.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
    Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
reply by moongirlwriter on 13-Feb-2020
    :)
Comment from K Dono
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I like this simplicity that makes such depth. I have to counter though. If the rumors were false the day before, could you hope for that peace another day? Thank you so much for sharing!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
    Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A very thought-provoking offering for this contest that focuses on the constant 'drumbeat' of danger in the news... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
    And thanks for reading and reviewing zanya