Lost Child
Invisible victims of the Heroin Crisis5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 on something lost, Lost Child, has the right set up and sadly witnesses the sorrow of not being wanted. Such inner sadness would be hard to compensate.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This 5-7-5 on something lost, Lost Child, has the right set up and sadly witnesses the sorrow of not being wanted. Such inner sadness would be hard to compensate.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Yes, it would be hard to ever get over the feeling of being unwanted. Thank you for your review!
Comment from moongirlwriter
This writing makes my heart cry. Why is it that people have not figured it out, when they carelessly and selfishly have sex without protection. . . children are born. In God's plan, they need to give up their lives to support their child. This is what's wrong in the world. Even animals understand but humans don't seem to.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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This writing makes my heart cry. Why is it that people have not figured it out, when they carelessly and selfishly have sex without protection. . . children are born. In God's plan, they need to give up their lives to support their child. This is what's wrong in the world. Even animals understand but humans don't seem to.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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It is very sad! Thank you for the six stars!
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You are right. . .so very sad.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
A realistic 5/7/5 poetic offering that poses to the reader the burgeoning tragedy in America today. Just this morning the news show I was watching showcased the escalating prevalence of opioid addiction in New Hampshire.
Well-crafted.
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
A realistic 5/7/5 poetic offering that poses to the reader the burgeoning tragedy in America today. Just this morning the news show I was watching showcased the escalating prevalence of opioid addiction in New Hampshire.
Well-crafted.
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from papa55mike
There are so many lonely children waiting for adoption. What a wonderfully written poem and the picture is haunting.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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There are so many lonely children waiting for adoption. What a wonderfully written poem and the picture is haunting.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from zanya
A heart- wrenching poetic expression of what it must feel like for a young child who longs to be loved in a forever home- a very effective picture to illustrate
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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A heart- wrenching poetic expression of what it must feel like for a young child who longs to be loved in a forever home- a very effective picture to illustrate
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Thank you!