Cellmate
A man in prison.2 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very sad offering of a man in the system that will never be released. Good luck in the contest! ;)
have forgotten of Phil --> have forgotten Phil OR have forgotten about Phil
police send him --> police sent him
has sexually abused, and murdered his wife and children in the past. --> sexually abused and murdered his wife and children.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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A very sad offering of a man in the system that will never be released. Good luck in the contest! ;)
have forgotten of Phil --> have forgotten Phil OR have forgotten about Phil
police send him --> police sent him
has sexually abused, and murdered his wife and children in the past. --> sexually abused and murdered his wife and children.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thanks! I have fixed the mistakes. I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
Comment from rspoet
Hello Writer,
Well, this is a tough story about Phil who seems
to deserve his punishment from the crimes he's committed.
A victim of his own demented acts.
Well written.
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Hello Writer,
Well, this is a tough story about Phil who seems
to deserve his punishment from the crimes he's committed.
A victim of his own demented acts.
Well written.
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my story!
