Comment from Marjon van Bruggen

Excellent

This is the kind of wall that alas...many people build over the years. Narrowminded, intolerant, in the end also completely lonely people, who never learned to live a happy life.
True prisoners.
A good story.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020

Thanks for the insightful review. I agree, racist and intolerant thoughts do seem to build like a wall. After time, you can no longer see over it. Have a peaceful Sunday, cheers.

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 09-Feb-2020

You are welcome.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

And, that is such an all-too-common story these days... sigh. Great offering for the contest with a wonderful, far-reaching message! ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020

Thanks for the review. We all seem to be putting up walls and that is sad, cheers.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

You did a phenomenal job with that prompt. You say so much, and you don't even mention Trump. Who needs a wall at the border when everyone wears one of their own. By keeping everyone out, Jenna has become her own prisoner. And your story is even the right length.
Good luck in the contest. I think this one should do well.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020

Thanks for the insightful review Debbie.Seems to be lots of walls being built these days. Sad state of affairs, cheers.

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This short short story is an excellent contest entry on the topic of prisoner. Of course it is metaphoric as it tells of the isolation behind a wall of bricks of hate. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020

Thanks for the review Susan. I imgine being a rascist is much like a brick wall. No sunny human compassion, no breezes of love. Cheers.