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A Fathers Grieving Heartache.

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My loss of my only son Jason.

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Comment from Janilou
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'And, as I reach deep within my Broken of Heart?'
'If You God would allow me the Special Privilege to see my only Son again?'
'Yes, for only one moment in Time...
'With all of my Sufferings...
'And, with all of Your Blessings...
'And, with all of the powers that You have bestowed upon me.'
'And, with this pain from my pen...
'Please God, make my Unending misery's stop?'
"For Just a Single *Drop?"

Such moving and heart-wrenching cries from the heart itself.
Beautiful artwork to go along with it.

Made my heart ache, but in a good way.

Jan

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
    In order to be able to touch?
    So very, very, much?
    With your Mind, Soul, and Heart?
    Share if Ye dare?
    And, all whom read?
    Will, indeed follow and embark...
    Directly within your very,
    Heart...
    Ricky
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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From the heart, I can feel the emotion and the love and the desire for just one more time. I don't understand and yet I do at the same time, for each is different, but the pain and confusion are the same

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
    Thanks Barbara.
    And, you pretty much got the point and the idea behind this.
    Ricky