I'll Be Right There!
Don't start without me.13 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That's really funny and probably a bit embarrassing for her. I guess that when you have an open frequency like that, anyone could be listening. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
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That's really funny and probably a bit embarrassing for her. I guess that when you have an open frequency like that, anyone could be listening. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha! This made me smile as men rush to see this woman take off her clothes! I expect the sun was also laughing at the result of his toil, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha! This made me smile as men rush to see this woman take off her clothes! I expect the sun was also laughing at the result of his toil, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 70 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt.
This short story tells a clear story of an embarrassing experience.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the 70 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt.
This short story tells a clear story of an embarrassing experience.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
Comment from Minglement
Lol - very humorous entry for the 70 Word Flash Fiction Contest. That figures she'd be accidentally on an open channel. That's when those things happen :) Good luck in the contest.
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Lol - very humorous entry for the 70 Word Flash Fiction Contest. That figures she'd be accidentally on an open channel. That's when those things happen :) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
Comment from Debbie Pope
This one made me smile for sure love. What a hoot. I love flash fiction. I get such fun for a little reading. Everyone should love this one. Good luck.
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This one made me smile for sure love. What a hoot. I love flash fiction. I get such fun for a little reading. Everyone should love this one. Good luck.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a cute story. It sounds like something that I would do. I enjoyed the read. I did not see anything to recommend and I wish you luck in the contest. Shirley
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What a cute story. It sounds like something that I would do. I enjoyed the read. I did not see anything to recommend and I wish you luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
Comment from karenina
Gotta love those truckers right? This was just a fine 70 word flash fiction... (Don't 70 words go whizzing by in a heartbeat though?)--
Loves the sense of humor...and (not to date myself but....) back in the days when CB's were so popular I'd have similar "ad libs" from truckers on open channels... Sure made communicating an adventure!---Karenina
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Gotta love those truckers right? This was just a fine 70 word flash fiction... (Don't 70 words go whizzing by in a heartbeat though?)--
Loves the sense of humor...and (not to date myself but....) back in the days when CB's were so popular I'd have similar "ad libs" from truckers on open channels... Sure made communicating an adventure!---Karenina
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
Comment from BethShelby
I love story's that make me laugh. This flash fiction sound like something that actually happened. Fiction or not, it is funny. Good luck in the contest.
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I love story's that make me laugh. This flash fiction sound like something that actually happened. Fiction or not, it is funny. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
Comment from DragonSkulls
Hahaha. I don't doubt it one bit. I've been trucking most of my life and I know what kind of chatter goes on on those CB's. Plus, I've been a biker all my life so I know about the getting too hot deal too. Great offering to the contest, author. Love the picture. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
DS
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Hahaha. I don't doubt it one bit. I've been trucking most of my life and I know what kind of chatter goes on on those CB's. Plus, I've been a biker all my life so I know about the getting too hot deal too. Great offering to the contest, author. Love the picture. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
DS
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Thanks for your review, Ron! That poor bike was seriously overloaded, but we needed everything that was on it for our lengthy trip.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Funny little story, and one point minus for not watching your surroundings. Now jokes aside, this is a good entry for the 70 World Flash Fiction. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Funny little story, and one point minus for not watching your surroundings. Now jokes aside, this is a good entry for the 70 World Flash Fiction. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
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Thank you!
