Mommy's Sunshine
You only think you're hiding your mood from them...20 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
Well that kid not only deserves a star in his crown but a raise in his allowance! What a sweetie!
Precious story, Yvette. Congrats on winning first place and for being recognized!!
You go, girl! :)
Pome
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Well that kid not only deserves a star in his crown but a raise in his allowance! What a sweetie!
Precious story, Yvette. Congrats on winning first place and for being recognized!!
You go, girl! :)
Pome
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Yeah... this one was a blending of fact and fiction -- those memories are so wonderful, aren't they? :) I apologize for being so far behind!! Was a crazy week and I have all the boys home this weekend (HOORAY!!).... I'm attempting to get caught up while they're outside working on cars!! Don't know how far I'll get, but we'll see!! ;) :) Take care .. Yvette :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was lovely! And a well deserved win, Yvette, how come I missed it? I love what the little boy in the story did for his sad mummy. Bless his heart, I'm sure it did put a smile on her face. Congratulations, my friend! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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That was lovely! And a well deserved win, Yvette, how come I missed it? I love what the little boy in the story did for his sad mummy. Bless his heart, I'm sure it did put a smile on her face. Congratulations, my friend! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this little 'quickie', Sandra -- they're always fun to throw some crazy idea on paper!! ;) :) And the interesting? telling? thing is that the topic kinds reflects your mood at the time...LOL! :) Thanx for the wonderful review, my lady -- have a great week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ogden
Yvette wins again! Congratulations for a job well done!
(I don't remember if I already told you this. My story somehow was put in the wrong contest, and was disqualified when Tom couldn't correct the problem.)
Since mine wasn't in it, I'm glad you are the winner!
Hugs,
Don
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Yvette wins again! Congratulations for a job well done!
(I don't remember if I already told you this. My story somehow was put in the wrong contest, and was disqualified when Tom couldn't correct the problem.)
Since mine wasn't in it, I'm glad you are the winner!
Hugs,
Don
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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You are too fun, Don -- thanx for this wonderful morning sunshine.... there's no real sunshine here/won't be til Friday at the earliest! I'm thinking we might just 'wash away' down here - LOL! ;) And I'll take your 'gladness' even if it is conditional... (wink, wink)! ;) Big hug back! Yvette
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You're welcome, Yvette. I don't even know where 'here' is, you know. That doesn't mean I don't know where here is. It sounds strange, but 'here' is there. It's raining here, too. So maybe 'here' is here and there at the same time. (We might bump into each other in the supermarket, and not even know. It's a small world.)
Don
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LOL!! Little bitty town in West Central Alabama called Grant... :) ;) I'm thinking we might not be on the map much longer if it keeps raining this way... we'll wash right into Guntersville Lake!! ;)
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Well, I guess that makes a supermarket bumping less likely.
For some reason, I never get to Grant.
You must be uphill from the lake. I hope you don't get any more heavy rainfall! (No winks about it!)
xoxo
Don
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That is precious and very sweet. The lad thought that his mom was crying because of it raining. What a well thought out way to try to cheer her up. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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That is precious and very sweet. The lad thought that his mom was crying because of it raining. What a well thought out way to try to cheer her up. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your review - so glad you enjoyed little Robert's efforts!
Comment from kiwigirl2821
This is such a gorgeous flash fiction. Children can be the most healing little darlins in the world can't they? I love everything about this one so you are getting my vote. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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This is such a gorgeous flash fiction. Children can be the most healing little darlins in the world can't they? I love everything about this one so you are getting my vote. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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Oh, they certainly can! Thank you so much - so glad you enjoyed little Robert's efforts!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an uplifting write as a child's eternal optimism tries to cheer his Mother here and bring the sunshine to her heart, a very touching writes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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This is an uplifting write as a child's eternal optimism tries to cheer his Mother here and bring the sunshine to her heart, a very touching writes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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Thank you - so glad you enjoyed little Robert's efforts!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 70 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt.
This short story tells a clear story of a little boy's concern for Mom.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 70 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt.
This short story tells a clear story of a little boy's concern for Mom.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed little Robert's efforts!
Comment from Minglement
Oh, this is a sweet entry for the 70 word flash fiction. It is so like little to make an assumption about the reason for her tears and to try and fix it.I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Oh, this is a sweet entry for the 70 word flash fiction. It is so like little to make an assumption about the reason for her tears and to try and fix it.I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thank you - so glad you enjoyed little Robert's efforts!!
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You're most welcome. I thought it was so typical :)
Comment from Shirley McLain
Wat a tender loving story your 70 words told. When a child recognizes that a parent needs something desperately and tries to fix it, it speaks volumes about the situation. Great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Wat a tender loving story your 70 words told. When a child recognizes that a parent needs something desperately and tries to fix it, it speaks volumes about the situation. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much - glad you enjoyed sweet Robert!!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. This is a very creative flash fiction about a son who wants to make his mother happier than she is. The story is interesting, amusing, and touching. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Hello mystery writer. This is a very creative flash fiction about a son who wants to make his mother happier than she is. The story is interesting, amusing, and touching. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thank you - Glad you enjoyed little Robert!
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You're welcome
