Morning Transcendence
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Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Morning Transcendence, uses eleven words and requires a couple readings to clearly get the intended message. She smells good, man.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
This one-line poem, Morning Transcendence, uses eleven words and requires a couple readings to clearly get the intended message. She smells good, man.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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You know, a number of folks did not 'get' that, Bill -- so THANK YOU!!! :) Take care, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment from Minglement
As a matter of fact - they enhance the scent :) This is a beautiful entry for the I Line poetry contest. Your tender thoughts are enhanced by the gorgeous image of the dew kissed rose :) good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
As a matter of fact - they enhance the scent :) This is a beautiful entry for the I Line poetry contest. Your tender thoughts are enhanced by the gorgeous image of the dew kissed rose :) good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review!
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You are most welcome :)
Comment from May 1
That's so wonderful. I love the image it creates in my mind. Once more I am in awe of the magic you use to pick just the right words in just the right time. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
That's so wonderful. I love the image it creates in my mind. Once more I am in awe of the magic you use to pick just the right words in just the right time. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review, my friend!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem about the dew drops on the perfect red rose without masking the perfect perfume that is a fragrant smell that hangs in the air.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
A very well-written one-line poem about the dew drops on the perfect red rose without masking the perfect perfume that is a fragrant smell that hangs in the air.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review!!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Oh, what a glorious single line of poetry. I like the switch from the r's in dew drops on roses to masks sweetest sense, flowing seamlessly from one to the other.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
Oh, what a glorious single line of poetry. I like the switch from the r's in dew drops on roses to masks sweetest sense, flowing seamlessly from one to the other.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review, Darlene!!
Comment from Brett Matthew West
One line is not much space to pull off a well crafted poem like this one that says even the rose does not smell as sweet as the one you desire, but you accomplished just that. And, right you are. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
One line is not much space to pull off a well crafted poem like this one that says even the rose does not smell as sweet as the one you desire, but you accomplished just that. And, right you are. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review!!
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the one line poem contest. You have provided a nice description of her scent in few words. I enjoyed your use of alliteration. Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
This is a great entry for the one line poem contest. You have provided a nice description of her scent in few words. I enjoyed your use of alliteration. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review!
Comment from gingermo
A lovely picture to match the lovely words. The alliteration - dew drops/reddest rose add to the imagery of a perfect rose with a perfect scent. The word 'mask' used here is unusual and well chosen.
Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
A lovely picture to match the lovely words. The alliteration - dew drops/reddest rose add to the imagery of a perfect rose with a perfect scent. The word 'mask' used here is unusual and well chosen.
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review!!
Comment from Ricky1024
"Morning Transendance"
I'd a One Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
"Morning Transendance"
I'd a One Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review!!
Comment from Susan Larson
A rose is a rose is a rose...known for both her beauty and her fragrance. The picture you chose is beautiful. I could almost smell it. Much said in one mere line.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
A rose is a rose is a rose...known for both her beauty and her fragrance. The picture you chose is beautiful. I could almost smell it. Much said in one mere line.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review!!