What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "The Battle's Over"Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The battle's over -
night cometh;
taps issue forth rest.
Taps and night go together as the final resting place and the final act of saying goodbye. I feel this is excellently done and the picture enhances it
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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The battle's over -
night cometh;
taps issue forth rest.
Taps and night go together as the final resting place and the final act of saying goodbye. I feel this is excellently done and the picture enhances it
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Thank you. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work that went so well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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This is a very beautiful and very well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work that went so well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Thank you ever so much for your comments and for the best wishes.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your lune contest entry is in good form, fm. Your few syllables, as required, speak loudly about those who fought and died for our freedom. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Your lune contest entry is in good form, fm. Your few syllables, as required, speak loudly about those who fought and died for our freedom. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your review and your best wishes.