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Feasting on God's Word

contest entry

28 total reviews 
Comment from Therese Caron
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I live this poem! Your last line is outstanding. Your syllables are perfect and your words beautiful. The image you chose is quiet and lovely, greatly complementing your writing. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.

    lots of love...Portia
Comment from Darlene Franklin
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Thank you for the poem and scripture references encouraging us to dig deep into God's word. Let us worship the Lord together on this Lord's day. Amen.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
    Thanks so much for your review and it was indeed an honor to worship the Lord with you on the Lord's day.
    May His Light and Blessings continue to shine upon you.

    Portia
Comment from Alchera
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This beautiful thematic subject treated has been well written, set and counted within the rules of its "3/5/7 syllable Poem prompt entry" throughout its religious advice narrative storylined content. A good work and I liked it.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
reply by Alchera on 03-Feb-2020
    You are always welcomed from Italy.
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, you are so right that the spiritual nourishment from God's Word is a source of wisdom. I like the analogy of "manna from Heaven." Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments...
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Feasting on God's Word", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments...
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made effective use of all of your syllables to convey a powerful message about where to find wisdom--in God's Word. You have a good blend of literal and figurative language.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments...
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Mystery Writer. This is a great entry for the 3-5-7 contest and you have met the standard for the style. The message is spectacular. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments...
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 01-Feb-2020
    You're welcome
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Exceptional
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penpal: great witness to the world about being in God's word. I like the scriptures you add to share the good news. My favorite scripture is Proverbs 4:20+ for God's medicine bottle for our health. We need to go outside the steeple and touch the hearts of people. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thank you kindly for the six star rating, outstanding review and comments...
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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You've got that right. His word is definitely manna from heaven. I really like what you've done with this and the powerful message conveyed. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your pom, they are a perfect match with your words also on point. which captured my attention from the start.
Thank you for sharing.
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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 31-Jan-2020
    your very welcome. cookie