Syllable Counts ...
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The King and Queen"Anything to do with syllables
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Comment from Mia Twysted
There is a balance to the world that we all must understand. I am trying to make my nephew aware of this very thing right now. When the light flows the darkness will dissipate and when the darkness comes the light goes dim.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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There is a balance to the world that we all must understand. I am trying to make my nephew aware of this very thing right now. When the light flows the darkness will dissipate and when the darkness comes the light goes dim.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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... well thats the whole point let alone the dual development of the spiritual aspects of light and dark, or as some have it ying and yang.
To everything there must be a balance otherwise it leaves open a doorway to inequality and devastation. Even the earth in its rotation is in a finely tune balance and if my theory about running the e=mc2 equation backwards is true and it really will turn back time this really could cause a cataclysmic apocalyptic calamity for not just us but the whole universe.
The idea is e=mc2 is relativity "what goes up must come down" now run it backwards and what you get is," what goes forward must go backwards" ... my working example is this ... take a basic ruler and place on a book so it is angled. Run a pen from the bottom to the top ... ask yourself what is happening ... if the pen is time and the ruler is its path it is linear, all ways going forward, now push it to the top of the ruler and what happens ... it falls from the top ... this is the great appointed apocalypse. Now imagine when it gets to the top we could roll it to the bottom, what happens ... it stops and stands still until advanced up the ruler again ... in this scenario time should roll backwards. So all we got to do is figure how to stop the earth from rotating which is its progression forward producing the linear time and start to roll it backwards which should by my understanding roll time backwards ... then all we need to do is allow a second halt of the revolution and roll it forwards again ... thus avoiding the great dreaded end known as the abyss for all mankind. simple see !
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Such an interesting concept. But I wonder if man could be saved simply by turning back the clock
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Perhaps if we turn it far enough back he would never have been born that would be about the only way in the understanding of true salvation ...
Comment from padumachitta
Hello this works real good for this number poem contest.
It's a nicely balanced wee thing and gets a good point across.
Good luck in the contest contest
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Hello this works real good for this number poem contest.
It's a nicely balanced wee thing and gets a good point across.
Good luck in the contest contest
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you ...
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Kindof thought we were talking about Mother Earth and Father Time til that last line... great personification and thought-provocation in only 15 syllables! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Kindof thought we were talking about Mother Earth and Father Time til that last line... great personification and thought-provocation in only 15 syllables! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you ...
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Your syllable count was spot on. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Your syllable count was spot on. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you my friend much appreciated ...
Comment from BrooklynnPreston
This is beautifully written, and I think many different readers can take different morals or plots away from this work. Your poem is stunning, with descriptive words rather than vague ones. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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This is beautifully written, and I think many different readers can take different morals or plots away from this work. Your poem is stunning, with descriptive words rather than vague ones. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the description of
the sun and moon
balancing harmony.
-Effective alliteration
in the concluding line
that emphasizes your meaning.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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-Nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the description of
the sun and moon
balancing harmony.
-Effective alliteration
in the concluding line
that emphasizes your meaning.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you
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You are welcome.